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| Public Secrets 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome. Seriously.xD It'd've been awesomer as maybe a short story, but the oneshot is sweetz. |
| The Mad Maiden 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. I like how Clarice never betrayed Hannibal, even when she was under drugs. Great story, I think you portrayed all the characters very well! |
| miseria 2006-09-27 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. Very well written story. |
| Ana Yukina 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abuseIntense,beautiful!You are a very good writter! Clarice and Hannibal's love is really magic ^_^ |
| Kurby14 2006-07-27 ch 1, anon. | abusevery good story! plz wright more soon! |
| angelofnight 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseI haven't read a lector piece in almost four years. WOW! This was intense! I loved it! |
| caLeL 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abusesweet story..nice...really good..and i'm really impressed.hannibal and clarise together... T_T |
| piceandreamer 2005-12-06 ch 1, anon. | abusei luv this work of yours-it touches my heart and shows how much talent you have for writing! well done! |
| Zholla 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abuseBrutal...Delicious...and yes I would like to read more...more...More! The FBI treatment of her is fully in keeping with her operating within the spirit of 'protect and to serve' while those she served with always used the letter of the law to defeat the spirit of the law...in a vain attempt to fill the void of their emotional blindness. Smoking story...I just read the book a few weeks ago...yours is a worthy addition to the saga of hannibal and clarice...thanks |
| artificial night 2005-10-09 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely LOVE it. I've only ever read the book, but I've never been so in love with a book as quickly as Thomas Harris' Silence of the Lambs and Hannibal (save of course the Phantom of the Opera). I think you did a WONDERFUL job. I love how you threw in some Italian. It added something extra to your story... made it more realistic i suppose... PLEASE i don't know if you have any more inspiration for Hannibal stories, but if you do, I suggest you write them, for I am certain people (including me) will enjoy them. |
| ar-men66 2005-10-01 ch 1, anon. | abusenice story, really, a different ideas on the characters. just a little help: "i am here, my dear, i am here" in italian is : SONO QUI, MIA CARA. SONO QUI. and he is coming is better as " sta arrivando" . |
| Quite Silent 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abuseoo...i am very interested into what shall happene next. I am very impressed with your developement of Clarice, Post book. Very well done and pelase continue! Best wishes, Qs |
| Samantha Bridges 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abuseWonderful. Without a doubt, I can see some in the FBI going to such lengths to extract informatino from a captured Clarice. As always, the Good Doctor is there to play the part of the rescuer and avenging angel, and you wrote both of them well. Will we be seeing more efforts from you? |
| doctor katy 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written. I love that you included some italian. Is there any more to come? A second part or sequel? I'm lookihng forward to reading more from you soon. Katy |
| sarahann 2005-09-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like your story keep it up |