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Goku's Daughter
2006-07-04 . chapter 5
Christmas was your last chapter update. *laughs nervously*

Well Jen... I must say you have a story... and I would like to read more! SO WRITE! Oh man, I miss talking to you. Where have you been?
I'm off this week... and my friend has inspired me to write Sinful again... I'm writing chapter 19 now... and maybe you'll see an update soon =P But I need advise. Hence... I'm asking where are you =P

Anyways, good luck with your writing and your band and whatever you got going on. I wonder how exactly did planet vegeta come back? Hmm...

Talk to you later (hopefully)

GD
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Goku's Daughter
2006-07-04 . chapter 4
BARDOCK A HERO! COL!
Who's the new King of Vegeta-sei then?

I will continue reading
Goku's Daughter
2006-07-04 . chapter 3
Tehehehe... I liked this chapter...
My fav. part...
The ki-ball in Vegeta’s hand disintegrated as his attention went to his mate, but he still had Roshi by the shirt collar.

I love how your characters converse. I find it amusing!
Goku's Daughter
2006-07-04 . chapter 2
Ahaha the beginning was cute...
My fav. part:
“No Trunks, you just confused him. He does that sometimes, takes after me I guess.” Goku said as he rubbed the back of his head.
CUTE!

And then... everyone going to die... that sounds like Armageddon... =P anyways... going to read more!
Goku's Daughter
2006-07-04 . chapter 1
O I can't remember if I read this or not... So now I'm reading!
Sayian Girl
2006-04-13 . chapter 5
what the hell is up with all these unfinshed stories there realy trying my pacents.
Angel saiyan 22
2005-10-16 . chapter 4
I knew Goku would be famous once the suggestion was made. poor Veggie, though. keep up the good work!
miroku-has-darkness
2005-10-15 . chapter 4
short but not sweet
Blonde-Goddess
2005-10-10 . chapter 1
Hey didnt feel like signing in...I'm so freaking lazy anyways the chappie was nice now onto chapter two! woohoo!
Samuraiko
2005-10-09 . chapter 3
I like! But you do realize that you have to finish the thing... you can't just end it there!
Angel saiyan 22
2005-10-06 . chapter 3
did you repost? anyway, it was good. its on my favorite list, so keep it up!
Blonde-Goddess17
2005-10-02 . chapter 3
Sorry I didnt feel like logging in lol, and I'm sorry that I didnt give you a review sooner. I wanted to read the hole thing and it was outstanding!! its something different and unique...Update I'll be waiting. Until then peace ^_-
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