pregante with bulma's child?...either way i love the stoy made me cry!

wai...I'm moving onto the next chapter soon..but I had the song playing while reading it.. And damn, you make me like DBZ again.. *sniffles*

lmao this si so funy hhahahaghahahahaah it sio funny i love it

Goku, Vegeta, Anime, and Princess Chi:WHAT?

Alternate Chi Chi:I'm preggers with Bulma's baby.

Anime:Is that possible?

Vegeta:I don't know.

Goku: O.o

Angel Chi Chi:I'm glad that isn't me.

Alternate Chi Chi:I'm carring a Bulma baby(dances around the room)

Alternate Bulma:Come on honey it's time to go home.(Drags a very happy Alternate Chi Chi away.)

Princess Chi:That was my brother's mommy?

Angel Chi Chi:NO SHE WASN'T! I AM!

Vegeta:Well that was enough tramitizeation for one day, how about you Kaka-chan?

Goku:Yep.

Anime:I really freaked out now... where's my night-light?

Princess Chi:(Whistles innocently)

I didn't read the slapstick (because I liked the original ending) but it was probably good. You're very good at writing dramatic scenes...keep it up!

I loved it! It was wonderful!

Hahahahahahahaha! Preg with Bulma's baby? That's like impossible. LOL...

loved it. slash is always good ne?

Really good, the " Slapstick " afterwards was the perfect way to contrast the extreme meotion you put in the first chapter. Well thought out and well written, I look for to your future works

Heeheehee! I always wondered how Chi-Chi might react if she ever found out about Veggie and Goku! Most yaoi stories don't address that! Favorite part, though, had to be the bluebirds flying around Vegeta's head saying "World domination. Kill'em all." Funny epilogue!

*sniff, sniff* Oh, that was tear-jerking! I know the ending was happy, but still *sniff, sniff* aw, man, I'm shedding tears! Great story!

really liked the steamroller, that was good!

that was sooo sweet! the whole thing between vegeta and goku was very kawaii. i felt so happy for them at the end.

ha ha ha that's springer material i'm pregnant with your x-wife's baby and i'm gay to

okay. the ending was totally not up to the caliber of the rest of the fic, but it was great! oh this so needs a sequel! one with some nice juicy lemon. yes...