  BlackRoseFire 2008-11-17 . chapter 21Awesome story I can't wait to read the sequal. |
| ev80 2008-10-08 . chapter 1 "ONCE AND FOR ALL! AGAIN!"
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| DOES IT REALLY MATTER ? 2008-06-23 . chapter 3 YOUR WRITING IS GOOD. BUT I COULDN'T READ ALL OF IT. IT WAS A BIT TOO INTENSE FOR ME. SORRY. |
| Wispr 2008-06-02 . chapter 13 Shego and Kim do make such an lovely couple.
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| Wispr 2008-06-02 . chapter 12 Talk about a twisty plot! Good work.
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| Wispr 2008-06-02 . chapter 11 I like how you are making the villains very evil. Good work.
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| Wispr 2008-06-02 . chapter 10 You are doing great with keeping the tension level high.
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| Wispr 2008-06-02 . chapter 9 Really enjoying this story! Good work.
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| Wispr 2008-06-02 . chapter 8 Oh bloody hell... very surprising and good plot twist!!
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| Wispr 2008-06-02 . chapter 7 Bloody good, funny Ron is the only one to see through the disguise!
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| Wispr 2008-06-02 . chapter 6 Love the interaction you have going on between the characters. You really doing a wonderful job in capturing their personalities.
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| Wispr 2008-06-02 . chapter 5 How you are doing the very slowly buddy feelings is a very nice touch. Love it!
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| Wispr 2008-06-02 . chapter 4 Love how you are doing Shego's character, plus your writing really brings all of the characters alive. Good work.
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| Wispr 2008-06-02 . chapter 3 Can't wait to see how Kim reacts. Really enjoying this story!
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| Wispr 2008-06-02 . chapter 2 Love the name play on Shego's ID. Good chapter.
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