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Cupid's Jinx
2009-09-14 . chapter 11
-fangirl squeal and hand clap (just imagine an over-excited Alice if you're read the Twilight saga)-
I ADORED IT!

It was absolutely fantasmical; I love love love loved it!

Hehe ^^;

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sesshyluver6518
2009-07-17 . chapter 11
I LOVE UR STORY! =]
Kyonkyon01
2009-05-14 . chapter 11
The comedy in this was fantastic. I really laughed a lot at kagome's shinanigans. The only thing I think you could work on is making the plot unflod a little more smoothly. I'm glad you explained things in the end, but it would have been less confusing whole reading it if the little tidbits of information hadn't of been so jerky. There are some grammatical errors that made things a little difficult to read at times as well. But again, you have a great way of describing physical comedy. It made it worth reading. Polish up the grammer and smooth out the plot a bit and it'd be perfect. I'm glad I read it, i really laughed a lot ^_^ Good job!
jojo661538
2009-02-14 . chapter 11
the title kind of gave it away well keep up the good work i enjoyed the story ^_^
silverfairy89
2008-11-13 . chapter 11
omg!! lov it luv it luv it! *happy dance* ahem! *pull the 'be mature' lever* yes so as i was saying...this was a real cool fic! i luv kag the spirit..and the gods too..and sess-chan...and inu chan in luv with miroku(thou that was a bit wierd)..but nyways...a real nice plot...wel thank u!! keep up the good work!!
Akuhei-san
2008-11-01 . chapter 11
awesomness i loved it:D
Akuhei-san
2008-10-31 . chapter 6
lol, comedy...kinda ew though lol
Just A Girl1550
2008-10-04 . chapter 11
aw that was so great!
Bloodcherry
2008-10-02 . chapter 11
Wonderful story! XD You made me laugh, get angry, laugh, get teary eyed and laugh again! You made a fantastic job in this story and I really hope you make more like this soon!
Oyasumi Nasai,
Bloodcherry
half-breed vampire
2008-08-08 . chapter 11
aw how cute and funny X3 i love it you should like so make a squel like them telling a storyto their kids or something
Stories of Fiction
2008-07-18 . chapter 11
I just loved this story! It was so well written. The ending even made me cry! ^^
Inuhanyou21
2008-07-17 . chapter 11
totally enjoyed your fic! took me a few days to read it all, but really, it was way worth it!
Sesshys Angel of Darkness
2008-07-14 . chapter 11
i loved this story...i don't want it to end yet...but this story was awesome!
sessluver
2008-07-14 . chapter 2
Cool story, can't wait to finish it. Gotta go to bed now. Bye!
Snappy Burns
2008-07-13 . chapter 11
So cute. I'm really glad you decided to fnish it. Great job.
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