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| ProstheticAesthetic 2008-04-16 ch 8, | abuseAww... This is a really cute fic. Updates are needed. Fanservice is really needed. Time to rant. I love SunaKyo, and I have to have more. Kyohei is slightly, just ever so slightly, out of character in parts. I can never imagine Sunako even agreeing to let Kyohei get closer to her, but Hell, the fic must go on. The two month timeskip does get a little confusing. It doesn't seem like a long enough time for those two. I really don't think Takenaga is that dense, either. Noi would've noticed right off the bat too, but it is your fic. Update please! Boo done. |
| 1v2 2008-04-03 ch 8, | abuseman this is one hell of a great fic. |
| Kin Pandun 2007-12-11 ch 8, | abuseAn apology by fanservice? Sounds fun! Thanks for writing, Kin. |
| fleria-spark 2007-10-26 ch 8, | abuselovely story please continue to upload :D |
| Naruta13 2007-08-02 ch 8, | abuselove it please upload more |
| Loanlystar 2007-05-18 ch 8, | abuseUPDATE! This was one of the first fan fictions I every read on and you haven't updated once. It's not cool. So please update Because I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Love this fiction. It's so good so please update soon. ~Loanlystar~ |
| Loanlystar 2007-05-18 ch 7, | abuseI loves it so. And I would love to see that dress ^-^ *I go on thinking up my own fantasies for this fiction. Which by the way is super sexy* |
| Loanlystar 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseSaddly I love every title you mentioned there (but I don't know Your and my secret, I'll have to check it out *wink*.) Also Just a little hint. Hana Kimi ends in a relly cute way. Trust me, I've read all of it. Also there is a WallFlower anime on YouTube. It's sexy >.< Host Club is also on YouTube and it's really sexy >.< But I didn't like the ending of W-Juliet It felt unfinished. But ho well it was good enough ^-^ Oh and here let me mention one to you since you mentioned one to me (not really but oh well) It's called Angel Diary and it has secrets AND cross dressing. It's sexy. If you type in "Manga Volume" in google and click on the first thing then look for Angel Diary in the drop down menu then you can read up to book 4 chapter 2 (as of Friday, May 18, 2007). Anyway just some talk about sexy mangas ^-^ BTW, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I love this story, it's sexy. |
| snowygirl55 2007-05-12 ch 8, | abuseI love ur fanfic, but can can u plz hurry up with updating! |
| Death-Is-When-You-Live 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abuseDamn! I ROCKS Ive read all the chapters and i was instanley smmiten please update! |
| iamdevishangel 2007-04-14 ch 8, | abuseplease for the love of god continue the story u have me almost falling on the edge of seat. by the way I LOVE YOUR STORY! it made me addicted to so thank you very much |
| nihongoneko 2007-03-26 ch 3, | abuseEven though I've read up to chapter eight, I wanted to review on this chapter because I'm reading the story again for the third time and I wanted to answer the question you posted. No, I seriously have done similar stuff to what you said about blood. Everytime I'm cut, it fascinates me to watch it run down my skin. It has an odd metallic smell to it, did you know that? And I hope I'm not being odd, but quite a few of the pictures I draw nowadays has the subjects bleeding because it fascinates me so much. But anyways, I really like your story thus far and I hope you get to put out another chapter soon. I repeat- this is my third time reading this and I love it. =) sincerely, nihogoneko. |
| Annoying Little Twit 2007-03-25 ch 8, anon. | abuseWoo! Get them drunk! Hehe, I love this story, it's so... real! I mean, this could actually happen! WOO! GO YOU! *and update soon!* |
| Blah 2007-01-21 ch 6, anon. | abuseWhoa, cool! Except Sunako seems really cold to him... just a thought. |
| Airi-hime 2007-01-17 ch 8, | abuseOMG OMG I hope you can carry on this story! It is such a good story! Now if it was Ranmaru and Sunako that could be funny but i dunno kinda weird...thanks again!! YOU ROCK |