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sakurananachan
2009-10-25 . chapter 13
This hasn't been updated in like forever... you' are probably very nusy... not interested in the story... have a life outside form this... or all of the above.
I'm not gonna go all "Oh please, please, please, finish it!" even if it is what I wanna do, cuz thruth is I really liked this fic, is such a shame I took so long to find it... and is also such a shame you don't seem to be interested on it much now.
However, if you do find the interest back, if you find a super great review that could motive you to write some more - and I'm very sure it won't be mine, since I know I lack the necessary methods and words - or perhaps find in your computer a drabble of a chapter you started writing for this story, I would be more than happy to be able to see it...
I know for a fact I'll be thinking about this fic for a while now, and I normally don't get into fic I know are not completed and have a high possibility of getting unfinished... but couldn't stop myself from the concept of Sasuke as a robot and so had to see it, had to see the development of his character.
I loved it and now I feel a little sad that I won't be able to see where he could be going from there...
But like I said, if you do ever find it in yourself, it would be great to see more of this Sasuke, not only for the yaoi implications, that seem minimal, but for Sasuke himself, because he feels so very real and I like him
andrealphus
2009-08-27 . chapter 13
Oh god, it's over, but so not over. Agh, the terribly agony of cliffhanging, the unbearable reading pleasure...It's like the reading equivalent of blue b-- (*cough*)...

Anyway, that was bloody brilliant. I would love if you would continue with the bloody brilliance. Now, however, that I have reveled in a demonstration of your bloody brilliance, I feel like (lovingly) tackling the rest of your bloody brilliance via your other stories (70! *_*) and then moving on to your favorites list. Not a stalker, I swear...(couldn't afford the telescope anyway.) Good Writers fave other Good Writers and all that logical jazz.

Thank you for the loveliness! Naruto in furious-skin-peeling-demon mode and Sasuke going deadly-purple-drag-queen will never be the same again. Bravo.
*M*m*
2009-08-27 . chapter 12
My very intelligent response to finishing this chapter was

"MWAHHA~~ that was SO AWESOME"

...(*cough*) (*clears throat*)

Can I buy a passport to Crossed Wires Cyberpunk Universe? Do you sell those? Maybe you could get an illegal one from Kiba...

Broccoli soup will never be the same again.
*M*
2009-08-27 . chapter 8
That was priceless. Nuff said.

Certain things have been cleared up nicely. God, I love this story more and more. I want to read the rest but I dread reaching the edge of the cliff that is Semi Hiatus. But no fear, I carry on.
andrealphus
2009-08-27 . chapter 4
The spin on Neji's character is incredibly suitable. Takes the identity/bird-in-a-cage issues in a very interesting direction. Hmm..I feel stupid but I'm actually sort of unsure -which one- was the assassin. It seems this was written before the big revelation in the manga, so I'm not sure what to anticipate for your spin on the weirdness that is the last of the Uchiha clan. Sasuke did say he was the last one made after the other one went berserker. Presumably terminated shortly thereafter?

The brilliance keeps on coming. Off to read more ^^
andrealphus
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
You know, I felt a strong (rather involuntary) wave of trepidation when I read the word "furry," but the way you've worked it into the story along the lines of the implications of the canonverse is absolutely superb. And, when I think about it, Naruto with moving fox ears makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside. (*pets*)

Put simply, I am very impressed. The backstory and universe building that goes on with each sentence is clear, creative, and it flows effortlessly with your storyline. Your characterization is spot on and amusing at just the right moments. I sincerely hope this is taken off Semi Hiatus at some point in the (preferably nearer than farther) future, but I thank you heartily for whatever awesomeness you choose to make available.

The most original "narusasu fanfic" I have read yet. I'm not even sure I should call it that...your cyberpunk universe as I see so far compares to other original scifi I have come across. Bravo! Anchore! Well done.
siena
2009-08-15 . chapter 13
I hope you will not abandone this story and you will come up with a new chapter soon.
Aeterna Umbra
2009-08-10 . chapter 13
Awesome story. I like how you add in futuristic terms where they fit and are easy to understand. And how you've split the characters up but still manage to involve them in the story. And with few OCs, too.
Illucida
2009-07-06 . chapter 13
This is a pretty awesome fic. I'm trying to figure out who the killer is, and I have a few theories, but I don't want to say them in case I'm wrong. I also have a theory as to who the lady is. Argh. So frustrating.

I look forward to the eventual next chapter.
Bold Eyes
2009-05-31 . chapter 13
Keep writing!
Mytilene
2009-05-06 . chapter 13
Hi,

I just wanted to tell you that I think this is probably THE most original, creative universe created IN THE WHOLE FANDOM, and it would be a very, very, very big shame if this story never gets finished.

I can see you have it on semi-hiatus, and that you say you're having trouble with plotholes and things like that, but, if there's anything I can do to help- proofreading, acting as a sounding board for ideas, then I'd be willing to offer my services. 'Cause this is one very, very original piece of writing.

Sincerely,
- M.
shinigami
2009-04-19 . chapter 13
look. i don't review often, but you need to update very soon
LionsChild
2009-03-27 . chapter 13
duh,
im far too lazy writing a long, detailed review (sry about that^^°) - all i got to say:
interesting plot,creative setting(cyberpunk stories ARE rare...), please continue ;)

LionsChild
Voice
2009-03-23 . chapter 13
Uwaa! I haven't checked this story in forever! Nyahaha, I'm so happy it was updated while I was off in the universe floating like muffin in the sand!

Who is the girl he's visiting? I didn't notice a name. ^ ^' Ah well, I like the story. And how Sasuke misses his censoring program-age. My only pout is that this was updated last year and I never noticed. ; ;
Deep Breaths
2009-03-02 . chapter 13
Yes, Gaara. Technically, though (unless I am mistaken) it could still be Kankuro. I think that would be very amusing. I have read some of the reviews and everybody knows its Gaara. After all, who would choose Kankuro over Gaara? Not me. Love the story, too. Waiting for the update.
P.S. sorry its anonymous. I'm too lazy to login.
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