I must be a twisted creature. I mean, I've read lots of Pan/Trunks stories and sometimes it irritates me how quickly authors can make Pan and Trunks get together. Or how they give the two some very idiotic problems they have to deal with. In this story, Trunks and Pan had some very big problems that they had to deal with that were realistic. Married couples are not happy 100% of the time. And there are darker periods of a marriage. And I'm glad you wrote this. Fantastic, even if it ran on the darker side.

~Chica~

ok not to be rude but theres no quotation marks and that kinda makes it confusing to read. but other than that, great story

I loved it!
I love how you kept it real, not like some kind of soap opera crap. I love this story!
It made me have butterflies in my stomach all the way through (god, now i sound crazy)
i continue to love your work!

This was really good, I enjoyed your realistic depiction of the characters and their interactions, you deal with the pain the joy, the bitterness the rage, the love. You have a talent for story-telling, and you don't sugar coat things as well, even in Coffee and Cigarettes, which other authors might be tempted to end with a happily ever after, you tell it how it is. You are faithful to the characters and the reality they live in, making them seem real.

wow, I never wanted that shower scene to end. M Yummy Trunks goodness!!

I love this story
Tanya

this is one of my favorite stories.

hey, great story, keep it up.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

What I especially love about your writing is the heavy dose of reality you add in each word. Your relationships are very well-put together and realistic, with fights and sex and fluff all over the place. It holds true to the characters. Very well-written and an enjoyable read, and I agree—sometimes stories are better without the happily ever after.

Aw no sequel ;( but anyways I'm so gald you finished this outstanding and off the chain story. I look forward on reading more of your work.

hey, i loved your story .. it was mad :)
keep it up !

oh gawd .. that was **en brilliant .. I loved it >__< i wouldn't be able to handle a happy ending either ..

I think this is the best story i have ever read because it is more realist then any other stories. I think u should do a sequel. It would be so cool.

P.S. Keep writing stories like this. LOVE YOUR WORK!

interestin finish, i like how u didn;t fo it with flowers and roses god i hate those predictable they live happily ever after tales unless of coourse its sex at the end