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Reviews for: Helpless
Asugar
2008-07-22 . chapter 1
Very powerful. Good missing scene to this episode.
Nath
2007-03-05 . chapter 1
it was dark indeed, but so deeply emotional !
fantastic job !
CharmedAli
2006-08-28 . chapter 1
wow, it's good i love it
Lady Sidera
2005-11-07 . chapter 1
I just reread this and it's a really well done story! We definitely could have used more character interaction altogether in Lost Boys... I scene like this would have raised the level of the episode considerably.

Both John and Teyla's thoughts and actions were very, very believable in this fic, and it was so nicely intense and dark. Very real, and very scary! Very sweet hurt/comfort! :)
atlantisflygirl
2005-10-21 . chapter 1
Dark is good, I love your work and this story was espeically good. Loved it!!
Jackie
2005-10-04 . chapter 1
Wow. I really like that. Hopefully that won't be the last chapter. I actually had tears in my eyes. It's a real emotional kicker.
Marlab
2005-10-01 . chapter 1
I'm already enjoying this. Dark is good. Shep whumping is better :)
Muskoka Girl
2005-10-01 . chapter 1
Wow! That was amazing! I love your Sheyla fics they're the best!! This was so dark yet it was still really good!! Hope to see an update soon!
Trinitystargazer3
2005-10-01 . chapter 1
Excellent. I'm eagerly waiting for more.:)
Lennexa
2005-10-01 . chapter 1
Wow. That was really well written! Well done! I loved it! Very well done!
OMGirl
2005-09-30 . chapter 1
It's good...loved the way u described... the fight...how Rodney sleeps...lol..u know he needs his bed to sleep on or he's very cranky...And John's feelings...i loved it...
Cpt. Ritter
2005-09-30 . chapter 1
Another great SHEYLA by you. Keep them coming. And on one last note, the Lost Boys could've been a much darker Atlantis episode but they really downgraded it at the expense of character development, and you know what I'm talking about. The Sheppard that cares was completely MIA in that episode. ARG! Anyway, I'd better stop before this becomes a rant. Later.
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