Your rhythm is a little off...it kind of stumbles on itself at times. But then again, poems don't always have perfect rhythm, and sometimes that's the point. You have good imagery and character analysis, though. Well done. It's good to see some poetry on this site :)

It fits the movies name,beauty.

Wow. I had no idea what I was in for when I clicked on the link for your story thing. I actually like it. You are quite the magical poet. Nice work!

Mel

Spot on character analysis. Well done.

Histswot.

Who cares if you didn't remember her name? This is about the impression she made on you and you totally captured it. Wonderfully done. I really love it!

Wow that was a great poem. You summed up Angela's character perfectly.

Yeah, her name was Angela, idiot.

Short, sweet, and cute.

Her name is Angela. Cool poem

It's good, I really liked the way you wrote it.

Xx Morgaine

I like this one a lot. It flows very well, and shows a depth of insight into the character as well as many young girls. Excelent job.

Fantastic poem )

Angela

I think this sums up alot of teenage girls, not just the blonde from the movie. This was great.

yeah her name was angela hayes inthe movie, but the girl who played her was mena suvari.