 G8Master 2008-02-21 . chapter 7 WOOT! You're back!
And Paddy, I'm so touched by your author's note! (By the way, I'm a girl, so...) And no worries, I'm not planning on killing myself any time soon. *winx*
Anyways, I think I laughed myself silly with chapter 7, and what could be a better way to come back to this story? In ch 8, I was incredibly happy with all those devious plots. Rusty has a pretty sweet manuever with the whole Raging Bullet thing.
But why would you go to the trouble to shoot Rusty, Marcus and Tomi out to Io just to send them back home? Is that another of /your/ devious plots?
So glad you didn't give up on this story,
~Jr |
 Twilight Starr-Phoenix 2007-12-13 . chapter 8I liked the scientific explanation of Marcus fainting. I like this chapter better than the others. It had some action and it flowed well. Seeing the villians was interesting. Nice work.
~Twilight Starr-Phoenix~ |
 traycon3 2007-12-13 . chapter 8 Well, I see how high us reviewers rank on your list of priorities. Maybe I should just stop reviewing, just for that. *Storms off in a huff*
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Sorry, had to do it. Anyway, watch your spelling, especially in this chapter. You had a few words that were like "a" instead of "he" and "no" instead of "now"
Other than that, I didn't notice much. Can't wait to see what happens between V3 and Ubus Mellus! Update soon, please! |
 Twilight Starr-Phoenix 2007-11-13 . chapter 7Yes, I finished for now! Great chapter. Looking forward to more. Have a wonderful day.
~Twilight Starr-Phoenix~ |
 Twilight Starr-Phoenix 2007-11-13 . chapter 6Nice chapter. I liked the ending with the girl and Marco. That was funny. :D
~Twilight Starr~ |
 Twilight Starr-Phoenix 2007-11-13 . chapter 5Yay! I finally got around to reading the chapter. Aren't you proud? Anyway, I like the dialogue and I'm starting to realize who is who thanks to the little discussion about Animorphs. On to the next chapter!
~Twilight Starr~ |
 Twilight Starr-Phoenix 2007-10-29 . chapter 4Good chapter. I understand things a bit more now. Maybe I should have read the Animorph books before attempting to read this. The author's note was great. Terrific job!
~Twilight Starr-Phoenix~ |
 Twilight Starr-Phoenix 2007-10-29 . chapter 3Interesting chapter. "In the moon's place in the sky was Earth." was a great way to end the chapter. It peaks interest and leaves it at a cliffhanger. Cliffhangers can be very effective in getting reviews among helping the story along. ^^ I like all the action.
~Twilight Starr-Phoenix~ |
 traycon3 2007-10-28 . chapter 7 Yay, it's back! This story is really awsome, and I'm glad to see it's up and running again. Hopefully you'll update sooner, because I had to go back and read the whole thing again just so I could remember what was going on. ^.^' Which is probably why it took me so long to review.
Loved Wish-Wish. He was too funny.
I also enjoy all of the characters you have created. You handle them plus the Anis well.
Anyhoo, update soon, please! |
 Twilight Starr-Phoenix 2007-10-26 . chapter 2Nice description on the Dimensional Tunnel. I applaud you. Good chapter.
~Twilight Starr-Phoenix~ |
 Twilight Starr-Phoenix 2007-10-25 . chapter 1Nice blankie comment. That was amusing.
I really honestly don't know very much about the animorphs. I just know they morph into animals, but it looks like you have an interesting plot.
Good luck with writing, this story, and life. ^^
Have a wonderful day.
~Twilight Starr-Phoenix (here) and Twilight Starr (on FictionPress)~ |
 Marcus1233 2007-10-18 . chapter 7Three years? Hm, not that long. I could still find something to do while wait it out. (chuckles)
Ambitious, aren't ya? That's a ot of character. Authors had difficulttime in managing that many, sometimes forgetting some.
Wish-wish...well, I can seewhy John would've blasted the damn thing before he could sing that song. (chuckles) Would Marco be trapped forever as John? |
 Marcus1233 2007-06-14 . chapter 6A delightful read so far...
Are you continuing or you'll stop here. Either way...I want to thank you. I enjoyed reading it... |
 Marcus1233 2007-06-14 . chapter 3Now I'm just plain confused...I wasn't exactly paying attention. Who were sent to the alternate worlds? |
 Marcus1233 2007-06-14 . chapter 2I've taken a liking to Marcus already...aside from the obvious fact of our common name...I also happen to like things that involves magic...
Chaos...that's about saying the things in a mild fashion... |