your story is alluring, captures interest, and is original.

usually i can't stand oc's but yours is incredible original, not Mary Sue. And Edward plays his parts well.

It's sad to see this situation they face. Will Edward survive this ordeal? I can only hope that both shall prevail everything thrown their way. And what about the 'neighbors'?

I hope you continue this.

please update soon or i will die.
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update as soon as you can, this is the best story i have EVER read in my life, and i NEED you to update as soon as possible.
Please?

Xs and Os, Anna

Ack! I LOVE it! This is the best fanfiction of Edward! Please! Please! Write more of this brillant work of art! My mind craves for it! Such brillance!

This Was really Amazing so far!!
A person like you who seems to have little time to write this, you've done it beautifully (:
Never thought this random fanfiction I found could be this brilliant.
Really amazed by this creative story, I can't wait for chapter 16, haha.

This might be the best fanfiction in all of Edward Scissorhands fandom. Melora is a great character and the perfect balance between whimsical and understandable. There is nothing unoriginal about it--it's creative and it keeps me guessing and wanting to read more. It keeps getting better with each passing chapter and I can't wait for the next. Although, apparently it's been nearly a year since the last update. I hope it hasn't been abandoned. Has it?

Omg you are awesome! ^-^

*spazzes* *twitches* *dies*

This, woman/girl/boy(?), must be the most amazing fan-fiction I've ever read. You easily take first place and all that jazz.

Edward is FREAKING AMAZING. He's in character enough that I wonder why Johnny Depp didn't do a better job on his role in the movie. No, for serious.

Melora is cute and sweet and if I ever met her I would totally run up and hug her. I want to meet her SO BAD. (At first, I thought she was albino, like one of my imaginary characters.. lol)

Paula... One of my friends is named Paula... (And she isn't like that at all, but oh well.)

Your story line is one of the most original I've ever read. It's like a breath of fresh air from the normalcy of our little Suburbia Community here.

All in all, you win. Have some internetz. *hands over internets and cookies as well*

OMG! I'm just recently obsessed with Edward Scissorhands and was in search of some fan fiction that could give me equal satisfaction as watching the movie and yours was the first that grabbed me. Now I'm ruined for any other fiction! Nothing else compares, I love everything about yours, so PLEASE UPDATE! I'm hangin' here!

Anyways, great story, love your style, amazing art! and keep up the good work!

Oh my goodness! What a remarkable story! Please please please tell me that you are going to finish this, I am so cliff-hung right now...

You don't seem to need a beta-reader, you handle it well on your own. You're poetic and linear in your storytelling, you have no glaringly obvious typos or grammatical errors, and your characterization of Edward is spot-on. I'll volunteer if you would still require the services of one though, I have more free time that I know what to do with.

Please update soon! ^_^

Your story has brought me through so many emotions I didn't think my body harbored. This is by far one of THE best Edward Scissorhands fic I've read in my life. once again I love your Oc, this Oc I can relate to as well-with the art thing- Edward is in character and that's great because I personally find his personality to be very hard to follow up with. Some people cant really pull off the whole romance thing with him because of his lack of knowledge in it.

Oh and one thing, I don't know if you remember Edward being a scissor robot before his 'father' turned him into an android type thing. You didn't fully go into detail with it yet but I feel like your going to say the son Edward was based off of like to trim hedges, being the reason why the scientist gave Edward scissors for hands--now I'm just assuming that's what your getting at, with the kid holding the clippers and all. Its not a bad thing if its true though.

Oh, I don't know if you've found one or not, and by FF I'm not qualified to be one but I could help you with your uncertainties about your story(though I think your doing really good on your on).

Anyways, please update soon.

Wow.
I must thank you for all your work on this, it's the first time I've ever stayed up all night >.< My rats have been going mad, seeing me awake and making strange little squeaking noises in response to your writing all night, but it was definately worth it.
I don't have much mental capacity for any sort of coherient comment at the moment, but I felt I had to thank you somehow for this amazing story. I hope there is an update soon, for myself and all your other oh so apparent fans.
Thank you for the work you've already done, it's really truely wonderful, and you've added one more person to the depths of for the sole purpose of commenting on your wonderfully addictive story. ^_^

oh goodness the suspense is ripping me apart!
please continue! pleaase!

Wow.
I mean, just...wow.
I started reading this entire fanfic just today, and I haven't come out of my room since. You simply MUST continue this beautiful masterpiece! Every single chapter manages to take my breath away and captivate me in a way I can't explain. I can't imagine having the amount of creativity that you do, let alone finding a way to put it into words so flawlessly.
Beautiful. That's all I can say. I'm completely blown away.

love your story! please continue.

Let me just say, it's rare to find such deep, higher level philosophical thinking as you express within your fanfic, and i really think it's such a jewel. I also love how Melora is an artist, such as myself. Your fanfic truely does excite me with it's extraordinary wit, and the ability to provoke emotions and thoughts that people dare not say, let alone write.

Continue your fanfic, i assure you i will read, and many other will too.

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!! It was so great! They are making progress! Thank goodness. But... but... :tears start to fall: How could you leave me hanging like that? I can't stand the suspense! I want Edward to be fixed and I want him to experience feelings of love for Melora. She obviously loves him and now she's starting to feel something more.. I really truly hope he will return those feelings when he is up and running again. Speaking of which, FIX HIM FIX HIM FIX HIM FIX HIM! PLEEASSE!! I am going to go CRAZY! This is my favorite fan fiction story of all time and it's just killing me. Please fix Edward and please update again SOON.

I love you with all my heart,
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