Good story.

that was a really good story ;0)

That was great i loved it. And it is clearly for every Who fan to see that the Doctor loves Rose like hell, i can't wait to see the new ones, can you :)

YEY

poor jack

Brilliant. It's great to see a story that's actually more than just a angsty post-regeneration one-shot.

The only thing I can think of is that the fighting scene was hard to visualise because it seemed a bit rushed, and a little more characterisation and Nine/Rose couldn't have hurt (although even I will admit Nine/Rose is not ssential for a great story).

Well done, I hope it won't just end there as am curious about their further adventures now that the Doctor has gotten over his guilt thing. Although I'm pretty sure Rose would still be "safer" on earth, but hey, any excuse will definately do!

Anyhow, like I said, I'm very impressed at the length of this story and look forward to reading future works of yours if they are of a similar high quality.

That was a sweet story, and I am glad that the Doctor decided that he wanted Rose to travel with him after all. You've written a great little adventure, worthy of any Doctor Who episode!

good - but why didnt jack fifgt the helipads instead of rose - bet he would of been more effective!