Those were not hints. That was slight. Not hints. :3

(Is pleased in other words.)

Go Iruka! I love secret fiery Iruka the most! :heart:

I was very pleased with your story, thanks much. :3

I'd suggest going into a nice long chapter story, but then they got rather flirty so now I am saying. SWEET.

:D

I am pleased. Thanks much, and no chapter story needed. :D

Ciao!

I.L.

This was perfection. Wonderful job.

Damn, go Iruka! That was an intertaining read

Keep at it

Cheers

I really liked this story. Very very good! Thank-You!

this was nice. people usually ignore trickster iruka. also, i loved how hiashi got his ass handed to him. ;D

signed,

onewhowatches :3

Very nicely written. I really enjoyed reading this one.

i want morreeee gimmee gimme

) maybe the activities for that night?

I love how much you expounded on Iruka's past. It's one of the anticipated things I like in writers characterizing Iruka. They make him the simple, teacher chuunin, but with an edge. Kakashi simply could not fend off such an interesting person. There were a few grammar mistakes, but overall the story was awesome. Write more KakaIru please!

You know, the sentence "Heh….well I learned it's better to deal with the parents with the proverbial steel fist in a velvet glove works better then outright insults and challenges" is slightly redundant and does not run smoothly at all... I'd think something like "Heh….well I learned dealing with the parents with the proverbial steel fist in a velvet glove works better then outright insults and challenges" or "Heh….well I learned it's better to deal with the parents with the proverbial steel fist in a velvet glove then with outright insults and challenges" That sentence really stopped the flow of the story, I was caught there for a while trying to really comprehend what I was reading...

Other than that, though, this is a really good story. I love the characterization of Iruka, and the stories of what he did as a kid... Now I'm wondering about the story where Iruka put laxitive in someone's coffee...

I like how you showed Iruka standing up to Hiashi... it really shows the strength of his character that he is no more willing to back down when alone than he is when surrounded by others. I suddenly understand why Iruka's the one teaching all the clan head's kids. He's the one everyone can count on to do what is best for the kids, not just what the clans want...

Well written. Great read.

i wish there was a sequel! i want to see how hiashi reacts after this! and too bad iruka didn't say more about how hiashi doesn't know his daughters at all he's so right btw!

I really like this story. It shows that Iruka's not the push over that so many people seem to think he is. The fact that Kakashi didn't jump in and save him right away letting Iruka handle it on his own was a bonus.

this is a fabulous story...i can actually see another chapter added to it...but hey its excellent the way it is...great job _

AWESOME! D

I really enjoyed this fic! :) I thought Iruka was very in character with the way he handled Hiashi.

-Auphora66

Love this story and i love it more each time i reread it. It is one of the best Kaka/Iru fics ever.