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| princesscharmed2008 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abusei think that you should expand on this story. it is great and it is a great start for a long story. |
| BeautifulButDeadly 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abusei was so so so so so disappointed when Alanna didn't marry Jon, i could have cried, liked your ending some much better! |
| Lady Potter of Tortall 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. I like it. If only Alanna did marry Jon... |
| Jedijen66 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abuseHm... i like the geroge hook up better, but thats just me. this is a good one. keep me posted please. jen |
| Cursiveismything 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abusecool, I like how you didn't break up the other couples that happen in the series TP wrote |
| JenniNikki 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseYou know, originally, the Lioness Quartet was to be one book for adults, in which Alanna did marry Jonathan. However, when it was taken apart and made into four shorter books for teenagers, Tamora Pierce changed that, as the last quarter of the book felt wrong to her. She realized that Alanna really would not want to be queen, and she would be tied down, the last thing she would want. In the separation of the one book into four, she also removed a homosexual relationship between Thom and Roger... |
| hb23 2005-11-17 ch 1, | abuseLove it!..what i always wanted to happen...damn, why can't it be? Anyway..THATS IT?..where is the rest?? |
| crouchingbunny 2005-10-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is very interesting. Written very well. ~crouchingbunny. |
| Nightingale Tinuviel 2005-10-05 ch 1, | abuseHahahaha that was good. It's what alot of us wanted. But sadly it cant. sighes. but was good i enjoyed it thank you! |
| Doodle033 2005-10-01 ch 1, | abusei like it, but now i feel bad for dear old George, maybe he will end up with Thayet ;-) Please Read My Story, The Darkness of the WOlf's Eyes, and i swear i will read anything you ever write for as long as i am loyal to this website, (after that, no promises) *laughs* |
| anonymous 2005-10-01 ch 1, anon. | abusei like it...where is the sequel? |
| winky-wink 2005-10-01 ch 1, | abusesome parts of this are really funny. i love the dark humor. continuee.. |