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antiHEROine82 1/24/08 . chapter 1
Yet *another* amazing chibi story! Your talent for fluff is just... wow. My fave part had to be when Raph was taunting him with the candy, being so nonchalant about it. He's such a meanie! But it was so funny. Especially his last line before he skips out: "Enjoy your dinner". Evil lil' Raph. The ending was too adorable for words with sleeping Mike still chewing on the tough, yucky meat. At least Splinter knew that he *did* try. I hope he got his chocolate the next night. Anyway, brava once again! I love your writings!
netja 11/24/07 . chapter 1
Aw thats the cutest thing I've ever read!
eeveemew 10/13/07 . chapter 1
:D That's cute...I too hate when meat's like that and you have to chew it a hundred times...
TigerChickTigriss 7/5/06 . chapter 1
That's kawaii!

TCT
GrimSqeaker 10/19/05 . chapter 1
Vilka barndomsminnen det här väcker. Jag minns det för väl, man blev serverad något som bara inte var ätbart, men blev ändå tvingad att äta upp det, annars fick man inte sitt lördagsgodis eller glassen som var utlovad som efterrätt.

Så typiskt Raph att sätta sig och reta Mikey. Jag lovar att han bara åt upp sin mat för att inte Leo skulle få vara bättre på något...

Donnie kan konsten att spara choklad? Kan han lära mig det? Hur gör man?

Stackars Mikey. Han kämpar med sin middag, och så somnar han innan han har ätit upp... Jag visste inte att man kunde tugga i sömnen :-)

Söt och kul. Perfekt att läsa till frukost.
Becca T 10/15/05 . chapter 1
Awh, how cute! Poor Mikey, I hated being the last one at the dinner in junior school, but they did insist on putting mushy peas on my plate. Great story!
engelina 10/14/05 . chapter 1
nice story recognised a lot of mij own two children in it!
Ryan Phelan 10/4/05 . chapter 1
LOL great job! This story totally takes me back to my own childhood; or rather, my brother's. I remember one time he refused to eat his broccoli, and mom made him sit at the kitchen table until he did. Well, he sat there until midnight and still didn't eat it, so mom wrapped it up and served it to him the next day! It was quite the battle of wills, but mom won, as usual.

There was also the time he refused to take a bath, so she made him sit in the empty tub until he caved in...took all afternoon, but he finally gave in.

Me, I was the "good one" (more of a Don than a Leo), so I got to sit back and enjoy my brother's self-inflicted misery!

Thanks for the memories!
vulpixfairy 10/3/05 . chapter 1
that is so adorable! raphael can be such a devil and meanie to mikey

signed by the vulpixfairy
pacphys 10/3/05 . chapter 1
LOL! Doesn't sound like such a bad dinner to me...except the pork, never was a big fan of pork. My parents had a terrible time getting me to eat ham or pork or bacon. It's not a moral stance or anything, I just think pig tastes funny.

Heh, this sort of thing happened to me at lunch when I was in elementary school. I wouldn't finish the giant piece of chicken that was on my plate and the teacher wouldn't let me go play outside until I was done. Eventually lunch time ended and I didn't have to eat the chicken anymomre. I swear, it was like the never ending piece of chicken! Taking bites did not make the thing any smaller!

Yup, it wasn't a candy bar, but I've been where Mikey is. All my friends skipped outside to play and I was stuck with a chicken breast the size of a small elephant.

Oh Raph is CRUEL! LOL!

Ugh. Gross. Pork chops... yuck.

LOL! Poor Mikey never got his candy bar! Must have really wanted it to continue chewing on that dinner even after falling asleep! LOL! Too cute!

Cheers,

pacphys
Sewer Slider 10/2/05 . chapter 1
Ha! That kid left at the table for not finishing dinner was me!

Loved the chibi Mikey being tormented by Raph - evil Raph eating the choc in front of him! Ahh, and he couldn't finish it. This was a cute fic from start to end.
Sakura117us 10/2/05 . chapter 1
Mikey is so cute! Good story. _
Ramica 10/2/05 . chapter 1
Ah the no candy till you finish your meal. Trust Raph to sit there and torment Mike with his candy. Broccoli most kids hate the stuff and I can't blame Mike for not wanting it or starting a food fight over it.

Cute fic, it is going in my C2 file
KissMyAft 10/2/05 . chapter 1
poor ole' Mikey, at least he tried...as for myself i DEARLY do love broccoli and porkchops but with texas pete hot sauce of course

this was a good story about Mikey and his brothers Leo, Don, Raph, and their father Splinter,i am glad you have wrote this ninja turtle story and have shared it with us
Chibi Rose Angel 10/1/05 . chapter 1
Now that was cute! Where on earth did you ever get such an idea from? I can so see this happening to Mikey. With his cute little self! _ Good job!
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