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| WishmasterSeer 2006-03-05 ch 4, | abuseplease update |
| jennifer 2005-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abusehey i really really like where this story is going so far. its really interesting and you are really good at writing detail about a person. i hope you can put some more x-men characters in, and maybe some more action? or a fighte scene. i read chapter 3 and i'm happy you included nightcrawler. you really got his personality all right, hes so shy and cute! and it was the funniest chapter yet, and my favourite, specuially the closet part with logan and peter. (thats not piort 'peter' rasputin -colossus- right?? or is it him??) and maybe you can put some cyclops in it? hes the best and i'm very curiosu to know who nickoli is! PLEASE CONGTINUE SOON! |
| Shanikan Skywalker 2005-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay Alyssa, you posted it! Well I love where this story is going. Its very interesting to read new characters that weren't in the movie that you make up, because you can make the characters cool and have lots of depth (you put research into it) while other stories are just...meh. Don't get me started lol. Her eyes are really awesome too, I want yellow and brown eyes! Omg, I can't wait for the second chapter, (even tho i knoe a little about it) BUT PLEASE CONTINUE! gr even if i have to force you! And don't forget about... one word: Logan. :) |
| Toxic-Beetle 2005-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome story so far! I really like how this is going at the moment, update soon! |