love the premise

I <3 This Story Keep Going!!

yay “And why the hell is he wearing that damn straw hat? Doesn’t he know the thing is hideous?” the infamous hat make an appearance! waho *huggles and apples* for you

Really great ! Can't wait for the end !

LOL. Thanks so much for updating. This story is a lot of fun. I enjoyed the fluff.

Beth

Haha, I love Brass. Great chapter! Keep on with the good work :)

Glad you're still working on this!

Oh yay! This was such a cute chapter. I loved seeing Lindsey interact with Sara and Grissom. I thought you wrote the teenager perspective very well. And I laughed when I saw more of Brass with the two ladies. We've never seen him truly happy in the show and he sometimes gets ignored in fic so to see Brass wooing the stalkers is really fun. Thank you so much for this lovely update! I can't wait to read more!

Very cute-thanks for the smile-and the resulting subtrifuge of Gil and Sara! And for Greg's humorous willingness to take Lindsey! Thanks for the very welcome update! More please?:)

Cute chapter. I like that Brass is getting into his amdirers. Grissom and Sara need some alone time because we need some smut. Thanks for sharing!!

I want to see Grissom & Sara on a romantic dinner on the beach or something. Please. I want romance & sex...

i just caught up on this story. its great!
cindy

Oh god I love this fic to death!! It is so funny and sweet. I kept waiting for some real heavy angst and I am glad it hasn't come to be. The linda and ellen bit, too funny. I hope you keep up with this. It is fantastic!! I totally lost track of how long they have been on the boat. How much longer? Are you ending it at the end of the cruise?

Hi I have just caught up with this story and I love it please continue again soon :)

Hi, this story was recommended by a friend and I love it! Wish my work would send me on a cruise lol! Hope you can continue with this soon, in the meantime, I'll go read the rest of your stories. Keep up the good work :)