wow great emotional piece. i love the way you used a stream of consciousness style and kept to the lowercase letters. great flow!

"blink-and-you-miss-it Paul/Rebecca"

Cute. I liked this. It really fits the darker side of Paul that I've been imagining. That last part "and honestly? He'll be glad." was a great ending for it. Shows that maybe he's really not ready to be caged in by the fence. Bonus points for the R/P, although I would've liked something lengthier. *hint,hint*writeanotherfic*hint,hint* Seriously, though, you're a pretty good writer and I'd like to see you try doing Rebecca/Paul. Please? Pretty please with a cherry on top? (Or chocolate sauce if you don't like cherries?)

Luv, Adele

That's upsetting and disturbing and just all kinds of awesome. I love it. And it does seem in keeping with his character somehow.

yeah, another inside fic! wow, you're right, really angsty... i like! more please?