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| Morbidmuch 2008-06-15 ch 1,  | abuseIt was sad, but great. I love the fact that you don't really know who it is until the end. Great job :) |
| Philipa Aleshre 2006-06-04 ch 1, | abuseoh... i don't know what to say. I mean, i liked this, but... i don't know @_@ well, so... goodbye! keep writing! |
| greenelysium 2006-01-21 ch 1, | abuseoh my gosh, this is really good. Really sweet. Sad ending. But beautifully written. Well done. -Ash |
| bec 2005-11-23 ch 1, anon. | abusebeautiful you should continue with this *sniff* so sad |
| lazaefair 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abuseWith all due respect, it's a bit hard for me to see John so completely attached to anyone like that, much less Claire Standish--who is worlds away from him. I see him as someone who does have a sweet side, but is still 85% criminal, and damn hard to get close to. You do make the connection, though; going from lust to love in steps, and how much it frightens Mr. Tough Loner. Good stuff. |
| me 2005-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseNO! This cant b a oneshot! this is a great story u have 2 continue it! PLEASE! Ill cry if u dont! i promixe i will! |
| EmiliosLoofah 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abuseHey, that was really good! REALLY GOOD one-shot! Too bad they couldn't work things out! :( I Read your profile...I know this sounds shocking to you...but I've NEVER seen an episode of Friends, Will and Grace, 8 Simple Rules or the Gilmore Girls! My co-workers can't believe it either, but I'm too busy writing a fan fic myself! I don't watch that much television...but I HAVE seen the Breakfast Club (of course! I saw it in the movies!) and the Harry Potter movies. I've read the books too! Upload something soon! Sorry...I just can't read fan fics on stuff I haven't read or seen on TV or the movies! tk421beth :) aka: Emilio's loofah! lol (read my profile-I *heart* Emilio Estevez)!! |
| Jenifer 2005-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like how you arranged this story, the way you described how he felt for her and the way it all went wrong for them. I like all the little touches you had here, like him letting her borrow his jacket and watching American Graffiti and a pregnanacy scare and closing up to each other. Somehow it paints a realistic picture of a relationship and really keeps in character with John and Claire. Great work! |
| Nikki 2005-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh - thats so sad that she left him :( Brilliant story :) Love it! |