Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Breaking Point - Page 1 of 5
KaL KeY
2007-02-09 . chapter 11
this is a really good story! you should continue it, but i guess in the end thats all up to you, right? well thats all i have to say.
HaloFin17
2006-09-19 . chapter 11
Man, this is really getting dark! Please don't let anything too serious happen to Lani either, okay? So yeah, sorry if all these reviews in a row are annoying or overwhelming, but I think they're fun to get. Hope you've enjoyed them!
Oh, and pretty, pretty please clear up this totally messed-up misunderstanding between Kurt and Karma! I'm telling you, it's just not meant to be. After all, Kurt is MINE! I'm a little possessive of him, can't you tell? ;)
ttyl!
Halo
HaloFin17
2006-09-19 . chapter 10
AHH! Poor Vert! You won't let anything happen to him either, right? Glad Kurt's back, though! It'd been a while since we've heard from him.
Halo
HaloFin17
2006-09-19 . chapter 9
Definitely a short, mysterious chapter. But you say all the answers are coming up in chapter 10, so here I go!
Halo
HaloFin17
2006-09-19 . chapter 8
Oh no, his sis is involved now, too. This is getting to be quite a tangled web, but I'm enjoying it! It's actually kinda nice to start reading when there's already been so much written. Saves a lotta time and agonizing over what happens next!
Halo
HaloFin17
2006-09-19 . chapter 7
Aha, it was another "Star-Wars-esque" moment! I shoulda seen it coming. I knew you would work his dad in there somehow. Very clever!
Halo
HaloFin17
2006-09-19 . chapter 6
Yeah, that one was sad. But at least Taro knows now. But I'm not sure if overall that's a good thing or a bad thing...
Halo
HaloFin17
2006-09-19 . chapter 5
Time for a cliffhanger! Interesting twist with Tone and Karma. But like I said, this one's a cliffhanger, so I've gotta move on quick :)
Halo
HaloFin17
2006-09-19 . chapter 4
Wow, that was sad! I hope this all makes sense later on. Next!
Halo
HaloFin17
2006-09-19 . chapter 3
Me again, I'm back! So Vert and Lani, huh? Sure, I can see that. You said Shirako will be okay in the end, and you'd better be right ;) On to the next chap!
Halo
HaloFin17
2006-09-19 . chapter 2
Very nice, things are definitely progressing! A reunion will be nice. I love it when all the main characters are back together! ttyl!
Halo
HaloFin17
2006-09-19 . chapter 1
Hey, I had time to at least start this thing. It's good so far! I especially like how Kurt and Wylde have stuck together. Oh, and thanks for not making Karma romantically involved with Kurt. (Or at least you haven't so far.) It woulda really, really bugged me! So, yeah, thanks a bunch.
ttyl!
Halo
Sabrielle-X
2006-06-12 . chapter 11
Yay! update quick! that was brilliant! i had a horrible day at school today... a stupid test alled the new south whales maths! i mean seriously! who makes tests like that?! just so you can watch all the genius's get high distinction! but you better update quick! im beating my head against the wall here! i gotta know what happens next! there was a power failure yesteday, in auckland! no internet! why?! WHY?! havent i always been a good person? dont answer that... no seriously dont!
Selena McGonagal
2006-06-12 . chapter 11
UR going to India? Lucky U! I wanna go! Plz update again...wow...Lani... ur so out there its not even funny!LOL

SM
Kara Tezla
2006-05-13 . chapter 10
Okay! I'm sorry for not reviewing, but I seem to have a light case of short-term memory loss. BUT! I am reviewing now, so now you have to update! I will update soon if you update soon! Can't wait!

KT

PS If you send Wings' drone after me, I'll run and conjure up some kind of oversoul or something! I'm warning you! *grins*
Return to Top