thats great. i keept remebering the actual song and i could imagine yuna and lenne singing it your way.

Wow, that's really pretty! I love it!

wow! this is really amazing! it's so poetic! for some reason, i can get with writing an unpoetic poem...guess this makes up for my loss of talent! it's enough for the world!
hana, over and out.

I actually read a fanpoetry.

And this is good. "Suspended on Silver Wings" was a great line, and if you don't mind, I'd actually use that for a chapter title. Keep writin'.

Aw, that was really sweet!