This is a good start, please update soon.

Please write another chapter...that was good.

Great start! I'd love to see more. Is Daniel going back to the place where his parents died? If so, I'd like to see his reaction to jack getting hurt in the same place - of course, I love jack-whumping, too!

Very nice, very nice indeed. One can only wonder just what Daniel did with all the GameBoys Jack left in his bag in the past ;)