Oh wow! This is really really really good! I can't wait for the next chapter!

wow! Big chapter. Sady, poor Mrs potter

i love it. i love how you write everything in such a realistic way. i can really feel the emotion, it's really good. please update soon.

great chapter! can't wait for more

wow, its really good, keep writing~

This is a really good story!! I really like it!! Please continue and update soon!
~Ryanne~

Hello and welcome to Hogwarts!

After reading your fanfic with interest, I would like to extend a personal invitation to you to apply to The Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, an online message board role-playing site. The site is set in an alternate reality from the Harry Potter books, so authors who role-play there may create their own characters and plotlines. Our school is one of the oldest and most successful on the net; we have been open since 19.

The Sorting Hat is currently open, and we are looking for dedicated, creative writers who love Harry Potter and would like to interact in the world of Hogwarts. Student characters at Hogwarts attend classes, play Quidditch, and have adventures, just as the characters in the books do.

Also, for this term only we are accepting students directly into the upper years, so if you are interested in playing an older student, please come and apply.

I sincerely hope that you will come and experience the magic at Hogwarts—where the adventure is always waiting!

Your friend,

Headmaster Caratacus Messinger

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Great story. It's so sad...

Please update soon.

Love it!

Well, then I suppose I'll be number three, and I'll just say that I really think you should right more. It's really interesting, you see. Oh, and "You're a good goy, James. I hate you and all, but..." was simply brilliant. I hope to "see you" again soon.
Freja

no dont stop this one! its so good!its its completely different to any one i have read before which is excellent!

I don't know why you have so few reviews. I blame it on the bad publishing timing cause there's no way you even think this story is not good cause is wonderful. Besides, there are tons of lazy people who don't bother on leaving a review. At least, fom now on you can count on a new review per chapter cause it's a rule of ine to always review. keep updating!

great story can't wait till you post more

I am very impressed. It's quite good. Keep writing.

great story hope you can post more soon