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Splendid Shadows
2005-12-07
ch 3,
abuseNice story! LOL I wouldn't mind waking up to him either, smelly socks and all. :P I'd help him bathe too, haha. Keep up the good work!
Bustahead
2005-12-03
ch 3,
abuseI'm sure I reviewed this before but if not, then who am I not to review again?

(smiles)

as always, I loved the humour in it, especially considering it was about my fabourite animal. The cat. (mreows at Lady and grins)
Ki Ki
2005-11-29
ch 3, anon.
abuseI laughed so hard at the part where Lady turns back into human and go "Omg!" Dante got more rewards than I thought he would, hehe. If I was Lady I think I would clean up his place first before thinking about doing anything else.

Also, I wonder what the people on the street will look like if they see a cat giving directions to a driver.

I think both endings were great. It's interesting to see how different authors end it in different ways.
antobalo
2005-11-28
ch 3,
abuseYou have the ability to always find that unique little twist...very imaginative and fun.
Sam Valentine
2005-11-28
ch 3,
abuseVery cool. I enjoyed both versions, although I'm a sucker for the romantic endings and all that and this was especially sweet! the 2nd chapter is a silly, fun part, and writing about Lady having her breasts bounce is something a dude would write about. I would.heh.

The last part is incredibly sweet,I laughed at a few areas which is quite a treat.This was original and beautifully done. Both parts were fun to read. Great jobs you two.
Koyukitori
2005-11-27
ch 3,
abuseoh! hahaha trick surprise :D

I also like how you told us what happened to dante's weapons...esp abt Nevan's jeaously hahaha.

Poor Lady. No wonder the cat was so smart!
nicely done : ).
Kalina Ann
2005-11-27
ch 3, anon.
abuseAw...! So sweet! I Think I like this version better ^_^! Well, done. Keep up the good work!
Unknown
2005-11-27
ch 2, anon.
abuseLoved it! A bit weird, but cool none-the-less. Keep up the good work!
The Tyrant Hamster
2005-11-27
ch 3, anon.
abuseAww, I think I learned something about fluff and romance after that, it was so, I dunno, sweet ^^. Way more romantic than mine, those tender moments, between them both, mostly with Lady as a cat, they were just so beautiful, really touching, tender instants that brought vivid images to the mind. It was very well written, hardly a bump in the flow with solid word choice, and the plot had a nice, classic feel to it, making it a joy to read as it was written so touchingly. I especially enjoyed this because I got to see another direction I could have chosen myself, and well, its something extra, which I'm grateful for :). In either case, its a wonderful ending, a little longer than I expected but that's just more to enjoy, great work buddy :D.
Lori
2005-11-27
ch 3, anon.
abuseAw! This was so cute, V! I love it! *glomps* It's just so cute! Doctor Doolittle. Teehee!
Euphoria Quzori
2005-11-26
ch 3,
abusethat was really good! it was like a different version of chapter 2, actually. Can't wait for chris's part. Should be good!
Kato Shingetsu
2005-11-22
ch 2,
abuseA good ending! ^_^
Tia
2005-11-19
ch 2, anon.
abuseJust as good as the first chapter, Just with a little more omph to it. Good job Chris!
Sincerely,
Tia AKA Jester
tia
2005-11-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseI think that this was pretty awesome for a first chapter. It really draws you in, and it makes you want to read on. When the chapter ends, You get all impatient and stuff=P But anyway, Its a work of art in words!

Sincerely,
Tia AKA Jester
ulysess
2005-11-19
ch 2, anon.
abusethe first part is excellently written and well done, great ideas! the 2ndpart is very nice and descriptive, but theres a few typos but still excellently done! goodwork!
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