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| Splendid Shadows 2005-12-07 ch 3, | abuseNice story! LOL I wouldn't mind waking up to him either, smelly socks and all. :P I'd help him bathe too, haha. Keep up the good work! |
| Bustahead 2005-12-03 ch 3, | abuseI'm sure I reviewed this before but if not, then who am I not to review again? (smiles) as always, I loved the humour in it, especially considering it was about my fabourite animal. The cat. (mreows at Lady and grins) |
| Ki Ki 2005-11-29 ch 3, anon. | abuseI laughed so hard at the part where Lady turns back into human and go "Omg!" Dante got more rewards than I thought he would, hehe. If I was Lady I think I would clean up his place first before thinking about doing anything else. Also, I wonder what the people on the street will look like if they see a cat giving directions to a driver. I think both endings were great. It's interesting to see how different authors end it in different ways. |
| antobalo 2005-11-28 ch 3, | abuseYou have the ability to always find that unique little twist...very imaginative and fun. |
| Sam Valentine 2005-11-28 ch 3, | abuseVery cool. I enjoyed both versions, although I'm a sucker for the romantic endings and all that and this was especially sweet! the 2nd chapter is a silly, fun part, and writing about Lady having her breasts bounce is something a dude would write about. I would.heh. The last part is incredibly sweet,I laughed at a few areas which is quite a treat.This was original and beautifully done. Both parts were fun to read. Great jobs you two. |
| Koyukitori 2005-11-27 ch 3, | abuseoh! hahaha trick surprise :D I also like how you told us what happened to dante's weapons...esp abt Nevan's jeaously hahaha. Poor Lady. No wonder the cat was so smart! nicely done : ). |
| Kalina Ann 2005-11-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseAw...! So sweet! I Think I like this version better ^_^! Well, done. Keep up the good work! |
| Unknown 2005-11-27 ch 2, anon. | abuseLoved it! A bit weird, but cool none-the-less. Keep up the good work! |
| The Tyrant Hamster 2005-11-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseAww, I think I learned something about fluff and romance after that, it was so, I dunno, sweet ^^. Way more romantic than mine, those tender moments, between them both, mostly with Lady as a cat, they were just so beautiful, really touching, tender instants that brought vivid images to the mind. It was very well written, hardly a bump in the flow with solid word choice, and the plot had a nice, classic feel to it, making it a joy to read as it was written so touchingly. I especially enjoyed this because I got to see another direction I could have chosen myself, and well, its something extra, which I'm grateful for :). In either case, its a wonderful ending, a little longer than I expected but that's just more to enjoy, great work buddy :D. |
| Lori 2005-11-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseAw! This was so cute, V! I love it! *glomps* It's just so cute! Doctor Doolittle. Teehee! |
| Euphoria Quzori 2005-11-26 ch 3, | abusethat was really good! it was like a different version of chapter 2, actually. Can't wait for chris's part. Should be good! |
| Kato Shingetsu 2005-11-22 ch 2, | abuseA good ending! ^_^ |
| Tia 2005-11-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseJust as good as the first chapter, Just with a little more omph to it. Good job Chris! Sincerely, Tia AKA Jester |
| tia 2005-11-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think that this was pretty awesome for a first chapter. It really draws you in, and it makes you want to read on. When the chapter ends, You get all impatient and stuff=P But anyway, Its a work of art in words! Sincerely, Tia AKA Jester |
| ulysess 2005-11-19 ch 2, anon. | abusethe first part is excellently written and well done, great ideas! the 2ndpart is very nice and descriptive, but theres a few typos but still excellently done! goodwork! |