Breathtaking and so sad! Excellent!

Gotta say I loved this, really nice job - K

For someone who doesn't write much, you did a damn good job.

Good title. Titles are usually what makes me read fics. If it's not the title, it's the explanation underneath. In this case it was the title. It's good.

You're very empathetic. You're also constant, which is good. It's the same flow the whole way through.

The idea was good. Drowning, desperation, haunting ... it was a good idea and it was done well.

You should write more. And when you do, tell me.

*blushes* Thanks! :) I'm actually trying to write something new at the moment. You're encouragement means a lot. :) Thanks again!

Hey there. Thought this little fic was interesting. Please go on. You don't suck at all. I promise. =)