So it's over? That can't be, I need more, please

Ah you never finished this! and it's SO good! I want to read more! Update please?!

good story so far hopefully there will be an update soon

You Should Update This Story Is Really Good!

Hilarious! And great concept, too. Please continue this! :)

Wow. There's just so much room for possibility! :). I'll be eagerly awaiting your next update. Even if it's years from now, I can rest assured knowing it will be worth the wait.

i hope you finish this one soon

Heh, this story is very amusing. You're one of the best fanfic-writers I know. And congrats with your marriage!

Aw I love it lol. For a few brief moment's you think he's actually not going to try anything. Or maybe I'm just slow. I really like the way you're writing Rory though.

"I'm intrigued."
:] loved it so far.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Man he sure knows how to rub her the wrong way... update!

Update ASAP!! I hope its a TRORY!!

That last part made me laugh! Have you ever seen the movie Hitch? The part were he's explaining how the first kiss on a date can decide if the guy is worth it can be an idea to use for the story.

um... 147 reviews for two chapters... ONE HUNDRED AND FORTY SEVEN, soon to be 148 with mine. wow that defintiyl warrants an update.honestly that is so many reviews. please update

oh please date soon, i'm freakin out if there's no additional update.