Nice job.

Umm I love Deck, as if I haven’t made that clear by now :-D

I liked it (a lot); I thought it was in character for him. He may have been the villain of the first season, but he was a very human villain.

I just have one question about the whole bride/ but never a wife factor of the story. Logan and Lydecker both referred to her as “wife.” So is this supposed to be kinda AU and I’m to disregard that or what?

Once more aside from my mild confusion, I really liked it. It was a great look inside of his head. It was really well written and I really liked the tone of it.

Nice, well written. A few details a little off, but an interesting pov.
How about some fluff? :D Please?

That was interesting! You make some good observations about Lydecker's character and Max's.

I really liked this one: ...but this one needed comfort and reassurance... He had a feeling it would be both weakness and strength.