 yAOi-aI lOVer 2006-08-10 . chapter 3when you posted the chapter by it's self i knew it was Sakano^-^ |
 Heide DeVries 2005-10-20 . chapter 7 Don't you mean, french fries on my mayo? Anyhow, nice ending. c.c; If you can consider anything with such sadness to be a 'nice' anything, maybe the word is 'sad' or it can be a new phrase, 'saderinshit?' Oh well, great writing. |
 Guren 2005-10-19 . chapter 7Wow this definately turned out to be a great story. I am glad that I had the pleasure to read it. I am definately going to tell everyone I know to read this. Very nicely written again.
OH and I didnt know I was happy-go-lucky...but thanks for the compliment. Cant wait to read what else comes from you. Ja ne!! |
 Anon64 2005-10-16 . chapter 7 Hard to imagine someone of K's temperament grieving. I also imagine Eiri must be having very complicated feelings, considering his relationship with Tohma. And like some of the other readers, I too, wouldn't mind if there were more of this story, but you've said it's over, alas. I can't help but wonder what would happen to Taki. Write more stories when you can! We don't get many writers of your caliber very often. |
 Miroku's Priestess 2005-10-16 . chapter 7Aw man...it's over? I didn't know it would actually END! Ah well. I'll get over it. It was good while it lasted. :)
But, you see, now that it's over, I can't inflate your ego anymore. Let's just hope it doesn't deflate TOO much until I read something else of yours. Ego-boosting is hard...and usually pretty unintentional. :P
But this is definitely one of the best stories I've read, of any fandom. I hope to see another one of your little projects sometime in the near future. :)
-Miroku's Priestess |
 Heide DeVries 2005-10-15 . chapter 6Ma-Kun is so sweet, you know. I don't really know whatelse to tell you, except Taki needs to be slapped around by Ma a bit, or hauled off to rehab by his bandmates. Oh well, I don't know. Wanna know something scary, that stupid song "Only The Names" keeps coming on when I'm reading this fic. It's about speed, but still, it needs to get off my itunes while Tachi's around. Nice chapter. Hope your computer gets fixed soon, so you can update. :p
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 Anon64 2005-10-13 . chapter 6 Poor Sakano again. I suppose suicide was the logical outcome of his obsession with Tohma, however. And good job with Ma-kun, since he tends to be minor-charactered to death. It's nice to see someone giving him a real personality for once. Is this going to be a Taki redemption story? I'm also wondering about the impact on the other characters. Grief is one of the more difficult emotions for a writer to portray well, so you've got a real task ahead of you if you decide to write those parts. But your story is really coming along quite well. |
 Miroku's Priestess 2005-10-13 . chapter 6I have to say, I loved this chapter. I think Ma-kun and Tachi make a really cute couple. I'm really not sure why I like them so much. But they're cute. lol
Once again, great chapter. As much as I may dislike Tachi for what he did to Shu-chan in episode 6, I still hate seeing him all messed up like that. 'Cause deep down, we know he's a good guy. :P
I'll be waiting for the next chapter. :)
-Miroku's Priestess |
 Heide Devries 2005-10-11 . chapter 5 Got it, I understand. It makes me sad... How could you? I'm'a gunn'a cry now! Nice chapter. |
 Miroku's Priestess 2005-10-11 . chapter 5I totally just realized what I like about this story, other than the fact that it's absolutely amazing.
Each chapter can totally stand alone as it's own separate one-shot, because reading them out of order doesn't really cause a whole lot of confusion. (Not from what I see, anyway.) And they all tie together so well, that they seem better as a complete fic than as stand alone things...you get what I mean?
Anyway, great job, and keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)
-Miroku's Priestess |
 Miroku's Priestess 2005-10-11 . chapter 4*applauds again* Once again, great chapter.
I don't want to make this review too long, since I have to read chapter 5 as well. But excellent job!
-Miroku's Priestess |
 Guren 2005-10-11 . chapter 4*dances around* YAY! I am glad that I was right. That makes me feel good..^_^.
But on a sadder note this chapter was not a good one at all. Poor Suguru and Mika. Poor Shuichi for getting shot. Poor everyone who is going through pain because Taki is psycho.
Oh well I will quite rambling now. I cant wait for you to update this. I am anxiously awaiting to see what will happen next. |
 Anon64 2005-10-10 . chapter 4 Poor Sakano. Nicely poetic scene with him, and I think you handled K's action scene well. Waiting for more bad Taki! |
 l.h.o.o.q 2005-10-09 . chapter 3Such sickly metaphors with Aizawa... I rather liked them. And I think you had Tohma in character very well in both parts where he was winning the verbal battle with Aizawa and would come to a hitch.
Now I do feel sorry for him. Taki is obviously mad. The bugs proved just which madness he was suffering from. I'd read this before and was surprised to see that I hadn't reviewed. I, too, was wondering just who was by Tohma's dying body. And I didn't recognize the story until I spotted your name, as I arrived to the third chapter. It all flows together very finely. Thanks for writing. |
 Guren 2005-10-06 . chapter 3Wow I would have never thought of it being Sakano. But all in all it makes sense. Truely another great chapter from you. You are amazing at the usage of your words and you know how to keep you readers interested. Congrats.
Oh and by the way I think what he stopped himself from saying I love you. I could be absolutely wrong about that but that is what I think he wanted to say.
So anyhow I will be patiently awaiting your next chapter. I cant wait to see what you have in store next. |