Great McKay hero story. Loved every word.

I really liked that! Very nice :)
Excellent Rodney whump.

aw so adorable! I love it

LOL, I like the ending :P Great story

Nice.

Wow! Amazing story! Excellent job! A truly fantastic story! Keep up the good work

How sweet :)
Nice outlet there, feel free to be frustrated more often...as long as it's not in response to dire circumstances!

Great job on this, I really liked it! :D *much nods* I love how Shepard stayed with Rodney and everything you did, totally cool :P

Ow... I can just see Ronon's reaction when he takes the pack from those two. It's priceless! You do write some awesome Rodney/Sheppard interaction. Keep that up! ;) V.

Hi Jen!

I really love the scenario you came up with for this challenge! I think the group of us are really demented, because we seem to love to mutilate Rodney a lot ::grin:: I am also following your latest story, In the Snow, with avid interest. I noticed how Rodney keeps putting off answering Teyla's question about how he knows how to survive in the extreme adverse Greenland-like conditions. This is very intriguing!

~Innogen

Before the colonel had a chance to pick it up, Ronon reached down and tossed it over his own shoulder. Then giving both men an irritated look he stalked through the event horizon, leaving them standing speechless behind.

Lol!! Thats so cute!! I loved it very well written! Thank you!

Fantastic. H/C with some humour thrown in...I was smirking at the Ronon and Beckett observations of Sheppard and McKay...the ending was equally funny.

AH! Another lovely story. I'm so glad to hear that the plot bunnies are so active.

I absolutely *love* this!
Sorry about the RL frustration, but I am seriously impressed with the way you dealt with it.
Fantastic team interaction, great h/c, and a wonderful look at the McKay-Sheppard friendship.

Great story, and well written! Excellent description of John worming his way under the tree to find Rodney... I found myself picturing it with uncomfortable ease. Also enjoyed the expanding role of Ronon, his clear, result-oriented concern for both John and Rodney. An excellent read! Thanks - Miran