keep up the amazing work!

Nice story. Keep it up.

This is great. you've got enough humor to keep it lighter, but enough drama/action/adventure to keep it interesting. i love the character relations. usually i dislike kat/tommy, but you write it well. i love your other pairing choices too.

Wow! I am impressed with the plot that seems to be playing out. All in all it's a great story. You did a great job. I hope you decide to update in the future! You were on a roll with that. I'd like to see what happens next!

Ouch on computer. I hope you can update this story because it has got my captured and I would hate to see this one end.

totally awesome story so far. please please please update soon

I hope conor and kira get together and i thought blake and tori where the best couple when i watched ninja storm so are they getting together or tori and cam i'm confused let me know :D

i have just discoverd this story and I am looking forward ro reading it.

good story

keep going

hey i just got an update today but even though i read through the whole thing i'm still confused about who's where and what everyone is doing it's like the story skips all over the place even more now that more action is going on help unconfuse me please

Excellent story! Can't wait for more!!

This is interesting so far. What does Emily have to do with the cogs attacking?

You know how much I love this story, Tams! I think this instillment was one of my favorites to date. Action, drama, comedy... all wrapped up in one.

I have to wonder if the boy in pain... the one who's name and personality was torn from him was Eric. I'm feeling a very Kingdom Hearts type of vibe... almost like he is becoming a type of Nobody, except he is allowed his memories. I dunno. I think I like where this is going though.

"Maybe a part of Tommy did die because of what happened on that island. " I like how you stated that. Tommy's initial personality seemed to disappear with Dino Thunder, and this is a sort of explaination that almost makes sense to me.

And For the record, Cassidy is freakin awesome and I love Rocky. You write them so perfectly. I love it. I'm also loving the Trent/Cassidy vibe that you kinda have going on in this story. I really like those two. And I loved the Cassidy/Jason scene. Too Funny. Rocky was just hysterical as usual.

Elsa reverting into Principal mode with David was classic. Loved it! Pink cars and detentions... so awesome xD.

The Krista/Kitty scene was kinda creepy. I think I know what is going on there from the stuff you've told me, but I'm not sure I completely understand quite yet. I'm looking forward to learning more about it.

As for Emily and Kim... as Alpha would say. Aiy yi yi yi yi. Jason is going to be **. And we both know that no one wants to see Jason Scott **.

I love Toss and his superman Pajamies. I totally see him as Jackson Brundage now. I should make a banner xD.

Hayley's opinion of the Earth ninjas is so halarious. Rocks for brains! haha. I heart Dustin. I hope they can get Tori up. She's going to have a seriuos score to settle, and I don't think it's going to be pretty.

"Man... What the Hell!" Best line ever! Tsubasa seriously made my day by saying that and Hunter was like the perfect person to give that line too. You had me cracking up.

Loving Kira and Conner's kinda unspoken relationship/tension they have going on. You know how big of a KirCo shipper I am, and I can't wait to see them actually go somewhere. I just know you'll write it so amazingly well.

I really feel for Cassidy. She is sort of on the outside looking in, never really feeling like a part of the group because she doesn't have any powers - she never has. Shes with these people everyday and calls them her friends, but she can never truly understand or relate to how they feel or what they are going through no matter how hard she tries or how desperately she wants to be able to feel and understand those things. She's sort of an outsider in that sense, not being able to fully relate to any one of the people around her. It's so sad, because Cassidy is so awesome and she wants to be able to help wether it be giving pep talks or whatever, but she just can't. Because she doesn't know what it's like. I am enjoying her and Kira's friendship though. Cassidy saves the day.

Seriously Tams, great writing. I'm loving this story more and more with each and every chapter and I'm already desperately waiting for the next chapter! I have to know what happens! And I think it's very possible that I might die if life gets in the way of your writing, because you're story is amazing. Awesome work, really =D

Good chapter, I hope Kim and Emily will be ok. I can't wait to see the confrontation between Tommy and David.