Oh my god, that was so sweet!

That was really good! I'm really sorry to hear about your grandpa, and hopefully you get better soon. You wrote Shannon's pain very well, look forward to reading more.

Wow. That was amazing. It's so short but it's absolutely wonderful. I especially love the Charlie one(I'm a total CC shipper). It totally capured the moment.

OMG! Your story is so awesome! It is so good! You're truly an inspiration!

omg, this is amazing. I love this, it's short, but it's so beautiful. It captures what Charlie must have been feeling. I don't know about mixing Sawyer up with Jack- they look very different, but GREAT short piece.