*fans self*
pure unadulterated love.
keep. writing. forever.

nice! haha i think this is a really momokai pairing... they aren't ooc and you can tell that there is still the little rivalry going on. and i lmao when u made momo the seme!! haha! that was unexpected. (haha!) thanks for writing it...

~Shiroi-chan

"It's a souvenir keychain, with the name of a resort and an ugly pink and yellow plastic fish. It's the worst gift ever. Momo opens his mouth to tell Kaidoh that, but what he actually says is "Thank you." He thinks he'll hang it on his tennis bag."

This line is so so so awesome, I read it over three times. XD You did this pairing so well, I loved every last part of it. So in character. Very good job! Poor Momo, so frustrated throughout. :(

Momo and Kaidoh are so cute together, neither able to admit in words how they really feel about each other. I love the pairing...

I love how you had them repeat that conversation, just switching people at the end!

Well written! Great read.

Wow, Momo is so funny. I can totally see him being so impatient. Cute MomoKai, and well written!

Aww, this was really sweet. I loved how the dynamic between them still made it seem like it was so very much them.

This is so cute!! I love this pairing!! :D

This is really close tio what i imagined when I thought yeaterday that i had to read a momoKai fic. Awesome.

so kawaii... ^_^

make more,,XD

OMG! This is so cute! i love it! ^_^

Aw, this is so cute! Seriously, it's really good. Muah to you. ^^

Nice!

Oh my lord. I absolutely adore you. XD My week has just been made. This was wonderful. And so, so CUTE. Augh. I don't know what else to say except you've got these two down pat, and I'm in awe of your skill. ^^

~Ashley~

I've just recently gotten into PoT so I've only just started scouting for fics. But reading something as good as this really lends me to like MomoKai more than I would if I'd never read it. Keep up the good work, and sorry for such a late review!

you don't have enough reviews for such a fic. I love it. There's not enough momokai out in circulation but I'm glad this one's out there!