Aww, I thought this was a really cute fic :'D a little fluffy :'D

yeah, it does make a bit more sense now! A very cute little piece, but cute in an original way. Very well written.

Strange...interesting...I'm a bit confused...but I suppose that what happened during the moment is less important than her reaction to it...

are these disjointed chapters or are they continuing?

what a pretty thing love is. Its Hinata! OR I think it is, but thats the pretty picture of this piece, that you can determine for yourself what it is. I liked it, but a little more insight into what the moment was. It annoyed me a little that it was all whispy and dreamy, but without much content. Nice wording, lalalal very dreaming.

Hinata

If I drew a picture of this one-shot, it would be of a nameless jewel that shone like a trapped star when it was new, but had been fondled and worried and touched again and again until its edges rounded and its surface was dull to all who hadn't seen it new. Nice work.

This is very pretty, and yet not at the same time. My favourite kind. I liked it a lot, very well done. Perfect word choices too... just a wonderful little piece. Love it. As for whom it is, I'm leaning towards Hinata or Sakura.

- Ebony