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Reviews For: Cold Hearts

Shelz
2007-02-10
ch 19,
abuseOh that was it?? The End?? Great story!! Thanks
Dawson-and-jo-102
2006-08-01
ch 1,
abuseLove It...Ill be waiting for an update..lol
Thucydides
2006-01-30
ch 1,
abusePoorly written, numerous missellings, weak dialogue, over sentimental and pointless description. Highly inadequate by any standard of literacy.

Substantial improvement in writing style is recommended.
Shelz
2006-01-26
ch 14,
abuseTWo incredible chapters...I like the fact that you are showing how vulnerable Joey feels right now. I'm really interested in seeing where Pacey will fit in all of this, especailly since h Dawson and Joey owe him an apology! Great stuff!! Can't wait for the next update!
Shelz
2006-01-22
ch 12,
abuseWow thanks for all the wonderful updates!! Got tosay I love the whole HIM/HE scheme you have going on...too funny! Thanks!
Shelz
2006-01-21
ch 11,
abuseAnother great update! I can't believe I'm saying this...but I am kinda worried that no one really talks to Pacey. Can't wait for the meeting! NIce work!
Shelz
2006-01-19
ch 9,
abuseWOW!! That was incredible!! Talk about leaving it...wow!! I hope that wehn you find where your going...it leads to Dawson and Joey finding each other again! Can't wait for more!
Shelz
2006-01-18
ch 7,
abuseYou know that Chapter was amazing, you had me competely convinced that well...he had gone the distance with Anna. Yet you show us that Dawson has come to his senses! Great story!! PLease update soon!!
Redzy
2005-12-31
ch 2,
abuseplease D/J ENDING!! keep going! love it update soon i hate anna all ready- movie nights are only for Dawson and Joey
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