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| Skoteinos Metamfiezomai 2008-01-17 ch 1,  | abuseAnother great piece... ~IGC t DM |
| Lifeguard 2005-10-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. That was intense, but amazing to read. |
| jbr12476 2005-10-05 ch 1, | abuseAw...that was so lovely. I loved this story and that Griss won't let her "Fall Apart" Great job. |
| sara kicks ass 2005-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved it,Sara and Grissom were written very well. |
| CSIFan4Life 2005-10-02 ch 1, | abuseGood fic. ~Jackie~ |
| VioletVision 2005-10-02 ch 1, | abuseI like! |
| leddy 2005-10-02 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written. That was definitely a good catalyst for bringing those two together. |
| And Also With You 2005-10-02 ch 1, | abuseThis was so haunting and beautifully written. I kept waiting to hear him tell her he wouldn't let her fall apart. I also like that they didn't end up having sex for some reason. It seemed more...I don't know, touching? Anyway, excellent job! I love your writing. |
| Denese925 2005-10-02 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I wouldask for a sequel, but you can't improve on perfection. |
| Lanta 2005-10-02 ch 1, | abuseWow that was not at all what I expected when I read the challenge... it was much much better :-) |
| taramis 2005-10-02 ch 1, | abuseOh lovely! I especially like the line "Maybe it’s the loss of what should have been, what can never be now.” by Grissom cause he can be sensitive and insightful!! I know he can! It's just his love for Sara blinds ans binds him. ::sighs:: I don't suppose a chocolate bribe would encourage you to write part 2? I'd love to see what happens when they wake up. |
| omaetoy 2005-10-02 ch 1, | abusewonderfully perfect |