Shame there isn't more to this

Oooh... loving this story! Here's to hoping it'll be continued someday! 3

loving this one too! Looks like Jazz is looking to get his head blown off. :D Write more soon!

Aww...

Poor Jazz.

Bed-ridden ans bored out of his CPU.

No fun at all.

*Grins* I like this fic! _ I can't wait to see what happens next! _

your not going to leave it there are you? I'm curious to see what happens... Please update soon!

aw! so cool! i guess jazz must bring prowl to meet viv at some point cos in the prologue she was going to skin prowl! yay! wait...that sounded wrong...

anyway, update soon pleasey please!

lol, jynx already doesnt like prowl! i find this very amusing! and shes older than both of them? hm. it makes sense - i just didn't picture it like that.

kudos for writing! update soon!

Wow. Somehow, I imagined Prowl and Jazz's situations the other way around. I like you style, so update soon!

You guys were right. I really had them mixed up at first. Great job yet again.

Somehow you guys make this so believable, I could totally take this as canon and just go with it. Goodness. You both rock my socks off.

I love this :D When is more comin out? Huh? Huh? Huh?

Dang...

Poor Prowl. Hate to be in his feet components right now. Sheesh, kid's got it tough. Do like the way TF's think in millenia and such.

And Jazz seems to have picked up some things since he came online. To bad cautiousness isn't one of them. Vivance had better keep an optic on him.

Yeah well... the longer I make a review, the more chance I'll say something stupid. I'm not really accustomed to using a lot of words at the same time. A bit like Blue actually. And to tell you the truth, the only reason I knew you did Jazz was 'cause you're the only one I know that uses 'sparkling'.

Oh heck, looks like Prowl's in for it this time. I really feel sorry for him, working so hard and not getting much for it, while Jazz sounds like he has everything handed to him. Fantastic work you two!

Aw... poor Prowl. Things are just not working out for him are they? Oh well, I hope we get to see more baby Prowl and baby Jazz interaction soon! So please keep up the good work, I really enjoy this fic. _

At last, the fateful meeting!...which didn't come as I expected, but twice as interesting. It really figures that Prowl would meet Jazz hiding from him (unconsciously this time though) after brewing some trouble that he semi-caused. XD This proves to be very interesting. Update soon, k? D

Prowl's part has so much forshadowing that I'm getting scared for the poor Sweetheart in coming chapters. Little wonder the Sweetie supresses his emotions. Then again, there's always Jazz and Viv to save the day... And speaking of whom, Viv is going to be *so* ticked that Jazz disobeyed her. As this fic gets worse, my one consolation is that they're going to be alright in the end... :) :