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| LOCISVU 2008-02-06 ch 4,  | abuseUpdate please! |
| mccoylover 2007-02-20 ch 4, | abuseI agree with some of your other reviews, it is sad to kill Abbie. But, biy what you can did with the fall out and emotion (or you could always pull a Alex Cabot..she's not really dead, just in Witness Protection ha ha). I hope you're going to continue, because I'd love to see the interaction between these characters. Jack & Tracy working this case together would be great, as would some interaction with Jack & Liz Donnally, if you added her in ( personal obession of mine). Please keep going, I would really like to read more and you have our attention now...don;t stop! |
| Raidon Phantom 2006-11-18 ch 4, | abuseOkay person I saw the review of Catherine Phantom. Yeah...that was me back then when I didn't have a profile. Jack's not happy about this and Alex is dead in the show now. I hope You know that. |
| Catherine Phantom 2006-05-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseYou made Abbie Carmichael die! How you could shes my favorite Character?! Well Who ever the killer is make sure he or she is setenced to death! Good so far now update and soon! |
| Village Voice 2005-10-02 ch 2, | abuse*cries* NO Why do you hate poor Abbie. *sobs* What did she do to you? *composes self* great first two chapters though. |
| tianathetiger 2005-10-02 ch 2, | abuseHee. Magical. |