Omg, you have to write more. I completely loved this. It was amazing.

Aww!(:
I loved this.
Nice job!

I love it!

I liked it! =] I enjoyed how Rachel was during Ross's return.

Liked it? I *loved* it. It is incredibly beautiful. I love your dialogue, how so few words could say so much. How in-character it all was... just plain wonderful. It's nice to see a mature, talented writer on this site who clearly cares about the quality of their writing and so understands the characters. Sincerely, well done.

I really enjoyed the ending. That was intense! Good writing.

a really good one i love rachel
and joey

I just can't get over the way you portray J/R. I loved how they were with each other on the show & you did a wonderful job putting them together.

that was totaly amazing and beautiful and... wow, greeat job

Lovely. Glad you're back.

aww...i loved it

What a sweet little AU. And a bit of CM? Oh, dear, it was CM driven (meaning that CM drove Rachel to Joey). I loved it. So sweet. I've been on a RJ thing lately, couldn't you tell?

Thanks for the compliment! Another look indicates I missed some things, but none are important.

I particularly like "The past started to blur and became an indistinct shape." This, I think, is what we should imagine happening to our beloved characters when they become happy again after their disappointments in love or whatever - not be so linked to the past that it keeps coming alive again.

AWESOMELY AWESOME! DO MORE RJ