wow this is my first second person POV to read... I was confused at first, I think it must have been difficult to write in this fashion as well! Well done, it's a cute wink, I was glad I saw the episode not long ago (watching the series for the first time only recently).

Welcome Back

I always enjoy your stories and this one was no exception.2nd person is not an easy format to write and unless it's done well it's not easy to read. Your first attempt is a success.

By the way the link to your homepage from the author's bio section on this site doesn't seem to work (I tried hopping to it). Has your location changed.

Ohh, excellent story! Different POV as well. It works!

Of course, this story kept me wondering if Diego and Victoria had other children, if the whole pueblo knew he was Zorro - since the thief did...

keep writing and posting !