I really like your writing style. And the story, even though it was humorous, was quite deep. I liked that. I can't say much more, but... this story was really good.
jam 2005-10-22 . chapter 1
hahaha! i thought at first that *airball* and *verbal* doesnt really sounds alike demo, when i repeated the words for a couple more times i guess, they do! ^__^ heh, stupid me. ^__^ nice fic :) glad 2 c that yer still writing.