What a battle!! Too bad the fight has to be stopped.. :(

Hi.. About what you write in your disclaimer : "...All original characters, with the exceptions of Yuki and Setsuna (both of whom will be briefly mentioned) belong to me. .." This really makes me think that you really own characters in Disgaea ^^;

But your OC Saito Onago sounds cool, you know, equipped with THAT many skills O.O First time meeting an OC with cool abilities^^

Once again you write really good battle scenes.
Keep it up!^^

You write the best battle scenes ever.
Keep writing!
And please update soon!

Yay!
u updated!
i love this story so far!

It's getting pretty good and I'm definitely gonna keep reading on.

Just wanna say that while this is obviously taking place after Aku no Tsubasa, you're obviously deviating from AnT. Of course, Laharl's mom had a different name, but I have a feeling I'm gonna start changing it from Rayne to Rena since it sounds better. Also, those symbols on Flonne, I actually had an idea for that, but for info on that, you'll have to wait till the end of the fic. I'll just say that Setsuna was not the one who gave the symbols.

Sounds like a cool concept. I liked the fact that you made this fic the sequel of my own...even though it wasn't even finished yet (gotta finish it soon...)

Short, but most first chapters start out small. It's got a good start. Thanks for giving me credit, though it would've been nice if you asked first. Still, good fic idea. I'll keep on reading it.

Keep it up!!

Wow, great story! It might be a good idea to start that side story, but you still have to give the background story of Saito, atleast the relevant bit. Anyway, good luck, 'cause I can't wait till the next chapter!

Kris McPay

I do not think that you should put the flashback as a side story
BECAUSE...This is impotant and vittal to the story!

I did that to tick you of teehee...By the way
STOP USING BOLD BLACK PRINT I MEAN IT IS OKAY
THAT YOU USE IT SO PEOPLE KNOW WERE THINGS ARE TAKING
PLACE BUT FOR THE LOVE ALL THAT IS HOLY
STOP!Whew.If you want to catch people's interest USE
CAPITAL WORDS!Aside from all of that the story is in a
good direction.:):):):)

Interesting