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| Christina Miller 2005-12-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI know I read this before but have never left a really detailed review. This is sort of an allegory for us as sinners, how we become so hardened to our sin sometimes that we know we need to change, but we don't want to, but we know we should. |
| Star Sheep 2005-12-11 ch 1,  | abuseWow...that was amazing! Going to fave list! |
| Nothanksnoname 2005-12-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseIs this Edmund? Or just generally a follower of the White Witch? Lovely little one-shot. |
| steelelf 2005-10-06 ch 1, | abuse"See! I lied, I cheated, I stole, I enjoyed causing other pain. I was one of her best informers. I would turn anyone in, anyone. I would laugh while she changed the others into stone. I would go and laugh at them in their cells and shout with glee when the realized what was bout to happen. It was FUN! I liked it. Let me run away and hid or kill me. You can’t love me, nobeast can love me. I am alone, frozen in the winter, no spring, no Christmas. I can’t even cry, Aslan, I can’t even cry." The last paragraph has several errors- Shout with glee when THEY... And HIDE or kill me... This has been added to my favorites- I love it! I LOVE it! |
| jasonc65 2005-10-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was wonderful. I have always wondered what happened to that dwarf after the war in which Aslan slew the Witch. |
| Elouise82 2005-10-03 ch 1, | abuseVery poignant. The bit: "Don't look at me, don't look at me!...I am unfit for your sight, look away!" was incredibly moving. A very well-done piece, with only minor spelling errors (breath instead of breathe and fore instead of for were the only two I noticed). Good show. |