I think you're too hard on yourself. It is somewhat redundant, but it's also unique unto itself. It seems the main difference to me is Folken in a good mood/Folken in a bad mood. And that's good to show that difference. I like this in tandom with fingers.

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i really like it, it wasn't bad. i think it turned out gud. u shud make more one-shot's like this.

*chibi usagi

What on earth, or should I say Gaea, happened to Fido? Is he on vacation? *shrug* I'm back! Miss me? Oh, of course you did! Muhahahahaha! Ooooookaay, something is definitely wrong with me. Anyhoo, I read your fic for the zillionth time and it's just as great as ever! I hope you'll post War is Kind and White Lie soon. Thx! ;)

What're you talking about? I luv it! Folken is one of the few people in Escaflowne who seems to spend most of his time thinking, and I bet this is what he'd be thinking about. Great job!

Oh, I love this! It's so deep. But what Folken says (well, thinks) is very true.

Hey! I really loved this installment. It was a tad hard to get into, but after I got past the first para or two, I was hooked. "Reflect", for me, seemed liked it was different from your usual style, very unique. I like it. This one sounded more...reflective and quiet. Folken's emotions are not as intense, and his rage has calmed somewhat. It's great! It's beautiful in a nostalgic way! Write more...! Rem