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| Radical Pretense Gothica 2007-11-30 ch 11,  | abuseAWESOMENESS! |
| Meismename 2006-07-17 ch 10, | abuselove ur story |
| lil'spencefan 2006-06-23 ch 5, | abuseThis story is awesome so far, but i just have one minor problem. in the story, the team was creating a profile for their criminal, and my problem is that they usually don't profile people on the show CSI. i think that you are using a profile because of the show Criminal Minds. I guess that they just meshed together in your head, but it happens. Anyway, great story so far, and I'm off to read the rest of it. |
| princessako 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abusei am an old reviewer with a new pen name. i still like your story. |
| Mouse In The Corner 2006-03-16 ch 11, | abuseNaughty pancho -.- |
| karmine 2006-01-19 ch 11, | abusegood story! |
| CSIslave 2005-12-07 ch 11, | abusethis was a really good story... sorry I didn't review the last few chappies I read, but I just wanted to read it all now! you did a really great job with this story... I can't read the sequal until later tonight, but I'm sure I'll love it as much as I loved this! all the best, Emily |
| CSIslave 2005-12-07 ch 7, | abuselol, DAMN STRAIGHT you're being mean to Greggo! um, have you considered that your shop teacher might find this story? THAT would be funny to be explained! gr, Fred ** me off... can't wait to read the rest! |
| CSIslave 2005-12-07 ch 5, | abuseomg, holy **... well, lol, that's all I can really say right now |
| CSIslave 2005-12-07 ch 4, | abuseARG, you are good at writing **, lol... geez, that would hurt so bad... can't wait to hear the back story to this physco! |
| CSIslave 2005-12-07 ch 3, | abuseAUGH holy **! I hope for the sake of the dryness of my pants, you DON'T include the torture... it's so sad... if this was an eppy, I'd be crying by now and flipping out. |
| CSIslave 2005-12-07 ch 2, | abuseAUGH that's not fair! he gets better just to get hurt again! that's not cool... |
| CSIslave 2005-12-07 ch 1, | abusefirst off, LOVE the title! good idea for a killer, too. this sounds really good... I have to wait until I get home to read more! *cries* well, once again, great job! |
| Alicat Sanders 2005-12-05 ch 11, | abuseand ah where is the squel and dont worry i wont tel OUR mum lol. luv ya sis, an hour later and i read it all. wow i think this is a great story!! Pancho is not his nickname its poncho but oh well i love u write more...hey theres a little girl in my whatever happened to a normal day story...i need help with a name and wow how sweet greg gave tara a home! |
| Alicat Sanders 2005-12-05 ch 10, | abusewow i suspected nick was one of those boys from greg's past! and yes i remembered the hole lol. i thought u had killed greg so i had to read it twice over lol |