Dude...poor Rae. And poor clueless BB.

What happened after her stone "death?" did she try her feelings again? or not?

Aww, poor Raven, life never is easy.

Very well done.

Kudos.

Very nice story! Keep up the good work!

I LOVED IT. My fave part was when you explained in detail "the gun shot and bullet wound". I wish it would go on longer though like raven fights terra for bb or something.(just a thought, but since its based on ur life i dont think u would do that.) This is my first ever story ive read on fanfic. and i hope u write more stories!(and if u do ill be sure to find them, read them, and review! LATER! -anonamis

How sweet! And sad, too! I love it! I'd like to read your other fanfics (if) you have any.

Good writing, with a few spelling errors here and there. Smetimes the thoughts didn't seem quite Raven-like, but the overall theme worked. I thought it was going to be something like a suicide oneShot from the summary, but I guess this is close enough it works.

[I was surprised how well I lied.]

that's so sad... sniff