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The Marching Ghost
2009-11-22 . chapter 5
O...M...G... That Was Totally AWESOME! please update, our i will have my friends find out where you live and we will form any angry mob around your house! just kidding! ;P. but i want to know how this goes plz, update!
Dreams.Rewritten.
2009-10-25 . chapter 5
Agh ! I feel stupid ! I've been reading this since you started writing it ! And never did I review.. So I just wanted to say thank you for such a great story ! I hope you update soon, it's getting near a year ? So I suggest ya hurry it up ;) :)
VickyP
2009-08-17 . chapter 5
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update ASAP!
Your stories are amazing and I would really like to know the outcome of Pony's problem.
I know that it's been a VERY long time since your last update but please do it soon!
Bumlets girl
2009-07-31 . chapter 5
I know you haven't updated in awhile but please do! I ned it! Please!
goldengreaser
2009-06-12 . chapter 5
update, pretty please
soda'slover
2009-04-22 . chapter 5
So you are a girl! Congratulations on your baby, the sleeping is tough but its worth it. Babies are so cute!
Anyway, I still am absolutely in love with your stories! Hopefully, it wont take two years to update-but I actually think i'll wait for it! Great chapter, update soon please!
Acoustic Heart
2009-02-25 . chapter 5
My sister had insomnia when she had her kids. Congrats on being a new mommy! Great storey to, I can't wait to find out what's going on with the voices!
~Michelle
EvilMicella
2009-01-20 . chapter 5
I must say, this story is intense. So was Maybe I Am Sick. But yeah, I definitely can't wait to read the next chapter, even if it'll make me real sad for Pony. =[ I really hope this ends on a true happy note cough cough haha
charlie-becks
2008-10-30 . chapter 5
i hope ur sons ok, an im sorry about all the crap u went though while writin these stories, im still readin an look forward to ur update, i hope eveythins ok :D
yasha's gurl22
2008-10-20 . chapter 5
i really love your story, can't wait till you update.=)
rabid-squirell-3
2008-09-28 . chapter 5
This is so good
but i saw that you havent updated in a while
so please update soon!
please?
ShotgunOpera
2008-07-28 . chapter 5
(1) congrats on being a mommy!

(2) this is an awesome story that realistically deals with mental illness. bra-vo.

(3) i hope you update soon!
rosariovampiregrl
2008-05-05 . chapter 5
update please. i need to read. i want to kbnow how ponyy handles his demons.
COOL
2008-02-21 . chapter 5
YOUR WRITING IS GREAT U MUST CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY KEEP IT UP!
The-Fan-Who-Lived
2008-02-18 . chapter 5
omg this is AMAZING. i was actually thinking of a scene that i heard of in the sixth sense. pony would go to dr. dawn with darry and soda or all the gang and at one point he would bring his journal and start writing in it. the boys would all watch him until they realize at one point his eyes go out of focus and he starts writing like crazy. earlier they talked about the voices and pony doesn't realize it but hes writing down a fight the voices were haveing in his head and describing them as the guys watch. (pony has NO CLUE of anything happening) then jen starts in fighting because they were talking about the fire and johnny and she say "pony dont listen to them johnnys right you are gold and you can stay gold" and the other voices start screaming at her and she screams to pony "DONT LISTEN TO THEM! THEY ARE LYING! JOHNNY WAS RIGHT! JOHNNY WAS RIGHT! JOHNNY WAS RIGHT! JOHNNY WAS RIGHT! YOU ARE GOLD AND YOU CAN STAY GOLD" any way thats how i see it email me if you want something more descriptive.
I feel so bad about your friend but shes in a better place watching over you and she would want you to be happy
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