|Reviews for Childhood Stories|
| helen carter 8/28/10 . chapter 21
this was really good. wats the name of the sequal?
| spacemonkey1129 9/7/06 . chapter 21
I really liked this story. I have a comment on how you intoduced becca,I know you wanted to wait til later on in the story to give some of her background &conection to the O'niells but waiting that long(7ch) for explanations is irratating &confusing!I'm only telling you this b/c the easier the story is to follow the more readers you will have. I look foward to the sequel &wonder if Jack &Danny are going to be in -laws LMAO!
| UnderTheScotsman'sKilt 3/29/06 . chapter 21
| Fortune Zyne 3/28/06 . chapter 21
Yay, I was a little disappointed at how Fifth ended because absolutely nothing but the Disrupter Weapon can kill them. That and another Replicator, perhaps. All in all, it was cool, Rebecca shows you can't piss off a chick like her.
Cool ending to a cool story!
| Fortune Zyne 3/27/06 . chapter 17
| Tabetha Winters 3/26/06 . chapter 15
Sorry on my chapter 16 review I wrote jack instead of Jake but anyways this chapter was good too...wow I'm doing these review backwards.
| Tabetha Winters 3/26/06 . chapter 16
wow, I'm behind! I started reading this story only when it had a couple of chapter on it and now its got 16! GREAT JOB!
Wow I'm good! I was predicting that Jack and Rebecca would have something between them a couple of chapters back! LOL Sorry, Anyways great chapter keep up the great work and I really hope that they are able to get Sam back soon! Great job and great chapter! Update soon.
| Fortune Zyne 3/25/06 . chapter 16
Rebecca is going ot get Fifth!
| scottiedog 3/25/06 . chapter 16
please continue! I wonder who the inside man is?
looking forward to more!
| Fortune Zyne 3/24/06 . chapter 15
Yay, you updated!
| scottiedog 3/20/06 . chapter 14
Reliving some of the episode with Fifth having Carter is eerie! This chapter is good!
Hopefully with all the family together they can defeat Fifth and these technobugs!
| Fortune Zyne 3/20/06 . chapter 14
Uh-oh, things get juicy!
| Letsgocubs27 3/19/06 . chapter 13
SON OF A BITCH
I hate Fifth...almost as much as I hate Pete
| scottiedog 3/18/06 . chapter 13
Fifth set a trap for Sam by letting Becca go! Jack needs to do something w/ him quickly! This getting good! Keep up the good work!
| Fortune Zyne 3/18/06 . chapter 13
Awesomeness! Contact me if you anymore hep with other stories! ;)