this was really good. wats the name of the sequal?

I really liked this story. I have a comment on how you intoduced becca,I know you wanted to wait til later on in the story to give some of her background &conection to the O'niells but waiting that long(7ch) for explanations is irratating &confusing!I'm only telling you this b/c the easier the story is to follow the more readers you will have. I look foward to the sequel &wonder if Jack &Danny are going to be in -laws LMAO!

great story

Yay, I was a little disappointed at how Fifth ended because absolutely nothing but the Disrupter Weapon can kill them. That and another Replicator, perhaps. All in all, it was cool, Rebecca shows you can't piss off a chick like her.

Cool ending to a cool story!

Oh wow!

Sorry on my chapter 16 review I wrote jack instead of Jake but anyways this chapter was good too...wow I'm doing these review backwards.

wow, I'm behind! I started reading this story only when it had a couple of chapter on it and now its got 16! GREAT JOB!

Wow I'm good! I was predicting that Jack and Rebecca would have something between them a couple of chapters back! LOL Sorry, Anyways great chapter keep up the great work and I really hope that they are able to get Sam back soon! Great job and great chapter! Update soon.

Rebecca is going ot get Fifth!

please continue! I wonder who the inside man is?

looking forward to more!

Yay, you updated!

Reliving some of the episode with Fifth having Carter is eerie! This chapter is good!

Hopefully with all the family together they can defeat Fifth and these technobugs!

Uh-oh, things get juicy!

SON OF A BITCH

I hate Fifth...almost as much as I hate Pete

Fifth set a trap for Sam by letting Becca go! Jack needs to do something w/ him quickly! This getting good! Keep up the good work!

Awesomeness! Contact me if you anymore hep with other stories! ;)