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Bratwurst 2008-04-04 ch 1,	abuseOh, I liked it. I watched the film the first time today and I was really unhappy about the ending - it's a little bit depressing, isn't it? Well, I like YOUR eding and the thoughts of Evan, they all really fits. "everything would be okay for the first time in his lives." -> nice. ;) Bratwurst
Twilight Power 2007-08-28 ch 1,	abuseI like this ending much better than the other 2 endings I've seen. Only, one eensy-weensy, teeny-weeny, itty-bitty, small problem: Evan made his decision eight years ago, not six years ago. Good fic.
Shawn-n-Bell 2007-03-04 ch 1,	abuseSo I have just recently watched the butterfly effect cause i was stupid and when it first came out i had this thing where i hated Ashton Kutcher. (don't ask) But back to your story, I so wish this would've happened. I mean after everything he did, was for her to be happy. sniffs
Invisible Shadowess 2006-11-08 ch 1,	abuseoh i so love you!! i was too very disappionted on the ending of the movie... i love the movie, it was great and it really kept you thinking, but at the end i was just like, "no... turn around, come back you can't end like this!!" but of course tv screens don't listen to people ;) so are you going to continue with this or is it really a one shot?? -Anie
BlueEyedFairy 2006-10-19 ch 1,	abuseThis was very well done. There are two different endings. 1. The one you "fixed". 2. When he killed himself in his mothers womb. I personally love the ending to the movie better. I think that them just walking away from each other, but them looking back, but kept walking, was the right touch. However, you wrote this very well and I like how you were creative about it. Well done!
hermixne 2006-10-15 ch 1,	abuseBravo
Maya-Nee 2006-07-30 ch 1,	abuseThat was a very nice alternate-ending for the movie :) I liked a lot when you wrote that Kayleigh was singing Oasis ! lol The only thing I would like to add in your fic is the fact that, imho, Kayleigh -at least barely-, remembers Evan, or she feel like she had known him before, like a Deja Vu. Well, just my opinion :) Oh, I almost forgot, have you checked the real alternate endings for the movie? Give them a try, specially the "Happy-Sappy Ending" :) Great fic :) Cheers !!
marinawings 2006-07-21 ch 1,	abusei just watched the movie for the first time today and thought it was good. and i really like your story. it gives the movie a happy ending, which i like. good work! it fits so well!
Uzumakifan945 2006-06-12 ch 1,	abuseif you have the dvd which i do this is an alternate ending in special features.
Eiramanna 2006-04-22 ch 1,	abuseaw i love it!! this would be soo much better than the actual scene! :D
Quillar 2006-04-14 ch 1,	abuseSo Great! This was my idea and was actually going to right a fanfic about it buy yours is totally better than what mine would have been. I love it.
Tsukikage1213 2006-04-11 ch 1,	abuseThis so(x million) should have happened in the movie. Stupid writers of the movie...
Sephiroth1Ripley8 2006-01-18 ch 1,	abuseThat was beautiful. (Just FYI: in the book version, Evan actually does turn around and go after Kayleigh, even though it doesn't say what happens...so you're actually more right than you think.)
kat009 2006-01-03 ch 1,	abuseThat's how the movie should've ended. :)
Charmed Ravenclaw 2006-01-01 ch 1,	abuseEh? I thought the ending was different, with Evan's unfortunate suicide as a baby. I'm confused. I don't get how he could be here right now (I know this scene was in the deleted scenes feature on the DVD, but...)

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