WOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON!

sweet stuff

cool story so far. got one question. is jessica walsh the daughter or the neice of maggie? you say it at one point that jessica is maggie's niece and then later in the same conversation you say that she is the daughter. anyway, thanks for writing and look forward to reading more from you soon.

Can't wait for more, please post your next part ASAP

Needs a touch of editing. Too instead of to in several places. Nice work. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

Update soon please!

I'm glad to see this posted here. I hope you'll be continuing it.

an't wait to read more, please try to update this fic ASAP. What crossovers are in tthis fic?